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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
8/22/2005 12:52:05 PM
You have captured a fine moment here. It needs to be cropped tighter to accentuate the birds and their fight. Crop and re-submit I say.
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| Photo By: jose markes
(K:157)
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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
8/22/2005 12:45:39 PM
Nice mood here. I might suggest a crop other than square. Very nice
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| Photo By: david george
(K:481)
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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
8/15/2005 3:32:58 AM
The horizon needs to be worked on. Also fix the color tonal range
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| Photo By: oguz topoglu
(K:229)
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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
8/15/2005 3:31:55 AM
A fine snapshot of a fun event. It could use some post camera work.
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| Photo By: Harald Felgentreu
(K:2146)
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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
8/15/2005 3:30:35 AM
Fine image. The horizon is a bit askew. The tonal difference between the top and bottom is in my believe too extreme. I like the clouds and earthy feeling though. Well done.
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Photo By: Dave K
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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
7/29/2005 2:13:57 AM
Nice moment here. The reflection works well. I might crop more vertical and straightened the frame. I would crop wing to wing and to the top of the birds head. Nice work with that big lens.
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| Photo By: Darlene Boucher
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Critique By:
Vern Fisher (K:36)
7/29/2005 2:07:43 AM
Great image. Very nice light and color tones. One nit might be the crop, seems a bit square. I might suggest a drastic horizontal crop. You have a lot beautiful sky to work with. The alternate crop might draw the viewer into the camels more. Overall, very well done.
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| Photo By: Heifetz Zhou
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