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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
9/8/2004 1:32:50 AM
the composition really tells a story, well done.
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| Photo By: Kim kyungsang
(K:14135)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
9/1/2004 4:12:00 AM
I just looked over your street portfolio of inner petersburg, the b/w work well and i eespecially like the old rundown buildingas as a backdrop to the activities. IO think this one really captures the feel very well and is in the traditon of post soviet street photography. I have walked around all over SP for a few years in the last 10, weeks at a time but never came across this courtyard w/its grafitti and sports play, if i had found it, i would have stayed a long time shoting all the activity, great shot.
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| Photo By: Alexey Tikhonov
(K:4)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
9/1/2004 4:00:52 AM
this is an excellent image, but i am suprised the lisbon still has gypsy street kids, since the boon in the 90's. I was there in 89 and they were homeless and living in park, but made good photography.
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| Photo By: Rui Filipe Rebelo Prego
(K:1213)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
9/1/2004 3:45:55 AM
the disperson of blue color throughout is a nice bonus to this very realistic mideast image
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| Photo By: Kiarang Alaei
(K:49417)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
9/1/2004 3:43:13 AM
dirty hands, embarassing smile, perfect
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| Photo By: Aimee' Desire'
(K:741)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
7/2/2004 5:09:38 PM
genuine emotions
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| Photo By: Jonelle Cetin
(K:116)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
7/2/2004 5:08:54 PM
i little off centered but had the potential to be a great shot
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| Photo By: elfo zx
(K:373)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/30/2004 2:17:45 PM
cute, i like it, the attitude feels genuine, image quality noticed.
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| Photo By: Marcy Massura
(K:1848)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/30/2004 2:11:36 PM
Interesting good photo but just to plain dull in appearance, I would pump up the contrast personally
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| Photo By: elfi kaut
(K:87)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/23/2004 8:45:49 PM
You really have a professional eye when shooting your family, way above snap shots, but most need big inprovements in lighting, contrast and some on focus..don't give up ou have a telent showing through in the few examples I see here..Good luck
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| Photo By: Franz Thoma
(K:3273)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/23/2004 8:42:06 PM
Thanks for the automobile history, appreciated.
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| Photo By: jake griffin
(K:3439)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/21/2004 7:59:48 PM
this one is right on the money, also would work well as a b/w shot.
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| Photo By: Jason Row
(K:134)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/21/2004 7:58:08 PM
Interesting take on the lighthouse keeping the malecon from view, i like the comp. but the colors seem to be a little blended and the exposure slightly off. See my malecon shot just uploaded if you care to.
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| Photo By: Jason Row
(K:134)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/15/2004 6:54:34 PM
excellent location, lots of texture to add to portrait.
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| Photo By: Dragan Trifunovic
(K:122)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/15/2004 6:52:50 PM
Genuine portrait, but then that's Bali...nice range of color, sharpness.
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| Photo By: Ian McAllister
(K:124)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
6/11/2004 2:51:59 AM
like your subject matter for a 1st image, good shot
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| Photo By: Dany Lanthier
(K:0)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
5/18/2004 8:55:23 PM
the verrtical panorama, pastel sky add to this iconic view, but the slight tilt to the left bothers me some.
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| Photo By: Andrei Kislov
(K:4038)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
5/18/2004 8:33:52 PM
i like the exposure, the complex b/w image, just feel the childs reaction should have been spontanious rather than stiff.
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| Photo By: eric schneider
(K:1294)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
5/18/2004 8:29:34 PM
pretty much on target, great shot
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| Photo By: Cliff Rosbotham
(K:2905)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/16/2004 12:42:24 PM
a really good looking image, i'll disregard the brihht spot.
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| Photo By: Sandro Bier
(K:99)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/13/2004 7:59:39 PM
i like the setting,beautiful exposure, just not the placment of the subjects behind the central sweeper.
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| Photo By: GoN kia
(K:0)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/13/2004 7:57:57 PM
check, the spot of color does it for me, i like it -in your face!
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| Photo By: Joshua Rainey
(K:5069)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/13/2004 4:38:25 PM
stands out from the crowd, good example of two subject image, excellent work
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| Photo By: Carol Watson
(K:5185)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/11/2004 2:41:24 PM
not bad at all, what really makes this work for me, is the sunlight streaks are at opossing angles to he verticle brick pattern, the monotone also works wonders, i have a similar photo of graffiti on the ground utilizing the same principle, good luck.
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| Photo By: michaelle .
(K:3807)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/11/2004 1:12:41 PM
i'm keeping this as a favorite, it truly does have -edge- in presentation value, congradulations.
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Photo By: Mary Sue Hayward
(K:17531)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/11/2004 1:01:29 PM
very workable perspective, good color combinations
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| Photo By: Witold Spisz
(K:1293)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/10/2004 5:21:18 PM
odd faces make interesting pictures, could be slightly sharper though.
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| Photo By: Shady Janzeir
(K:23)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/10/2004 5:18:24 PM
i think a step back a few would have made this one perfect.
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| Photo By: Amy B
(K:619)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/10/2004 5:16:41 PM
really honest, bright havana shot, perfect, just came back from there w/a lot of pics, so I feel the place in this one.
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| Photo By: Ivan Jimenez
(K:9098)
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Critique By:
jake griffin (K:3439)
3/10/2004 5:12:19 PM
kids acting like kids, nice bright sharp shot
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| Photo By: Gabrielle Willson
(K:7975)
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