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Critique By:
Samuel Downs (K:7290)
11/30/2002 12:49:17 AM
Marc, I like this photo of the woman very much. The pose and the lighting work well (in my opinion) to create an intimate mood with the subject. Well done. I wasn't aware of the PS filters until you mentioned it in your description - and I think that is the mark of skillful use of the filters. Sam
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Critique By:
jeff lynch (K:4770)
11/29/2002 1:17:28 PM
Very well done here Marc. Thanks for the description of your work. I like this one.
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Critique By:
Marc Gougenheim (K:5398)
11/29/2002 11:33:26 AM
I think that the original shot was better than what I see here. I feel the filters didn't add anything - all the contrary, Marc... My personal view on filters is this:
Either you make sure they are very obvious and make the image look like a painting or such in a very spectacular way. Either you just make sure they don't appear at all for what they are. Here, I feel you went half-way. The original was nice though... Regards.
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Critique By:
Ken Alexander (K:3905)
11/29/2002 7:25:32 AM
I don't usually comment on portraits but this one to me is particularaly expressive. It brings to mind all kinds of things she could be thinking about.
I can't say much about the Photoshop effects; I'm unsure what this would look like without them.
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Critique By:
Antonio Díaz (K:2710)
11/28/2002 3:27:05 PM
great dramatic expression! very good use of DOF too... looks very concentrated...
nice!
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Critique By:
Bjoern Oldsen (K:22)
11/28/2002 1:59:57 PM
Excellent expression well captured!
Björn
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Critique By:
Vivek Gopal (K:134)
11/28/2002 11:38:19 AM
awesome shot.
love how jewelry in the hair look blury, almost like tears.
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Critique By:
Marc Schultz ARPS (K:17)
11/28/2002 11:11:23 AM
Marc - Agreed about the chin on this image. I feel generally it is O.K. to cut the chin with this type of composition when you also cut the forehead however, I think it has to look more deliberate, meaning I should have cut more of the chin and not just the edge because as such it looks careless. The missing eyebrow is not a problem for me at all. Thanks!
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Critique By:
Marc Gougenheim (K:5398)
11/28/2002 11:07:13 AM
Great expression and great details, Marc... I just wouldn't have cropped the eye brow and the chin. Regards.
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Critique By:
Jeff Cable (K:3599)
11/28/2002 11:05:53 AM
Excellent work Marc. How close were you? The long lens and shutter speed suggest you had a tough time. I like the detail shown combined with the theatrical lighting. Very effective. Focus was spot on and I would not change this image in any way.
Cheers!
Jeff
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