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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13556)
11/7/2003 2:47:27 PM
I like photo. AS "deleted" states a little too mmuch at top. TCN is okay and I use it also. But it is not a great B&W photo. This expression is great even if c41.
Chuck
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Critique By:
Jocelyne A (K:1974)
5/14/2003 2:53:40 AM
nice capture! I like the way the subject on the far right is positioned and the lighting on her in particular is nice also. You definitely captured a moment in time with this. I agree with Debbie about the ad photo aspects of it  )
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37013)
6/21/2002 12:04:23 PM
nice shot! I like the wood framing the woman, it really makes her stand out.
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Critique By:
John Doe (K:155)
3/19/2002 12:38:48 PM
Very nice shot. Beautiful smile, she should be in toothpaste ads! Her face is a bit soft, I would prefer the focal point to be at her eyes - still a great image. Great color as well!
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Critique By:
Kevin Greggain (K:2572)
3/13/2002 11:14:47 AM
The color of the sweater against the fleshtones provides excellent contrast. The framing is great and I love the lighting.. Great work.
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Critique By:
Samuel Downs (K:7290)
3/7/2002 6:56:19 PM
Luis, This portrait speaks to me of a 'joy for life' and happiness in the moment. Well done here...
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/24/2002 6:47:52 AM
Good catch of reflection
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Critique By:
Petros Stamatakos (K:12101)
2/13/2002 7:28:15 AM
You gotta love window light... Nice shot Luis :-)
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Critique By:
Samuel Downs (K:7290)
2/4/2002 12:50:05 PM
Luis, What a happy and delightful express your model has. I know the smile is hers, but your must have worked well with her to get a moment like this one. I also shoot with the Nikon D1x and I love it...
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Critique By:
Samuel Downs (K:7290)
2/4/2002 12:47:27 PM
Luis, What a happy and delightful express your model has. I know the smile is hers, but your must have worked well with her to get a moment like this one. I also shoot with the Nikon D1x and I love it...
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Critique By:
Glenn Sweet (K:262)
12/26/2001 10:10:20 AM
.... well, I'm not a big fan of the straight ahead framing.... and the coat is rather desheveled. Very pretty model though. There seems to be just a bit too much tension in her body/face. perhaps it just caught her at the wrong point in a run? I must admit however... that moving shots are my toughest to get right.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
12/16/2001 3:15:06 PM
This is one GOOD LOOKING young man. Can we see more?
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
12/16/2001 2:40:43 PM
Agree with Nan about to much cropped from above her head. I would like to add that her arm that is hanging down IMO should be folded in her lap with the other one?
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
12/16/2001 2:18:48 PM
Ooooh! Oooooh! Lisa you're a card! I love controversy and luis asked for it. Hahaha...Great job of commenting on what could have been an excellent image AS the model is just a BEAUTY!
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Critique By:
Lisa Brainard (K:743)
12/16/2001 12:46:49 PM
Hey Louie! Life must be so good that she's been eating too much, is putting on weight and just can't quite get that jacket to button all the way up. hehehehe. I'd like to see the jacket either open or all buttoned. Also, am not sure about the straight-on view here, with top of head cropped. She kinda reminds me of a game show hostess peddling wares. Finally, her one earring is flipping around. What's up with that? (A lot of wind I guess.) And I'll end this by saying that's my opinion and I don't have a clue about fashion photography. heheh
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Critique By:
Deleted User (K:6775)
12/6/2001 1:56:26 PM
Ok Luis...you said you want harsh...here is my harsh *G* I dont think you really need all that empty space at the top.. I would crop down to just above the models head.
I like the shallow depth of field in this image but the overal image seems a little soft...I am assuming it is a compression problem and wont worry about it.
Only other nitpik I have is the models knee in the bottom right hand corner...would have preferred that it wasnt there. Overall it is a very nice evenly lit image and a good capture of a happy moment! *smile*...Maggie
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3844)
11/22/2001 4:56:37 AM
Great catch Luis....very well done.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
11/4/2001 5:09:08 AM
I understand her pose. Looking up but at what? That doesn't really matter to me a whole lot in that I know she is just posing for a feeling of looking to the skies? detlef does have some valid comments tho. Agree with him about this one.
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Critique By:
luis javier cota (K:273)
11/3/2001 12:06:06 PM
Yeah, I agree; as a whole, I was not satisfied with this shoot at all...oh well.
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Critique By:
Charles Hess (K:-183)
10/23/2001 5:08:59 AM
I also like everything about this photo - framing, lighting, color, natural expression - well done!
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Critique By:
Daniel Flynn (K:586)
9/11/2001 4:04:15 AM
Luis, I like the mood of the photo, and yes it might be better without the watch. But then again, what of the simple moments during the day we take or give ourselves before we head back into the rush of the day and its hectic schedule. So, in a way you have merged both ideas into one photo.
Danny
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Critique By:
Robert McDonald (K:511)
9/10/2001 5:01:11 PM
Missed this one-its fantastic!!
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Critique By:
Ian Low (K:23)
9/10/2001 8:09:04 AM
Wow! I like this one! The way the light is reflected off the people's face and features. GREAT!!!
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Critique By:
Joe McCary (K:3235)
9/10/2001 6:21:04 AM
Of the two images presented here, I like this one much more. It seems less confined and more spontaneous. She is more relaxed and seems happier. This frame is a keeper.
Joe McCary
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
9/7/2001 8:38:09 AM
nice pose and capture...dont need all the top though...
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
9/7/2001 8:38:09 AM
nice life time portrait....nice frame and light and attitude...
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
9/6/2001 6:50:54 AM
I like this very much. Would make a good advertisement poster for whatever show it was.
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Critique By:
Mary Sue Hayward (K:17531)
9/4/2001 6:19:03 AM
Really a nice image! The colors and lighting make it look like an old painting. Did you get any shots with the dancers moving? Sharp as a tack, very good since they are posed and it is a slow exposure.
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Critique By:
K. Krebs, POV Image Svc. (K:15)
8/5/2001 8:16:15 PM
Good job, this image gives the model strength as a woman.. As for the fogging... Well, I acually like the aura it imparts in this image...
Hey, thanks for your comments on my image of Isabel. She now has a site I put up at:
http://www.isabelv.com/
Feel free to drop by and give me some feedback if you want...
Keith
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
4/22/2001 8:43:20 AM
Luis nice job.. Just be very carefull with distracting elements in the background. Example: the tree behind her head, a bit too close which distracts from the images intent. Are far as the fogging on the bottom right you can crop that out.
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