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Critique By:
Mattias Eklund (K:2861)
4/5/2004 2:00:57 PM
Hi. I also like to take macros of barb wire and think this is a good shot. I like the contrast between the green background and rust red wire. I think you are slightly off with your focus, I would like to see real sharpness right where one of the wires meats the spiral. I also think that the composition is a bit messy with the wires to the left. I suggest to crop it tighter, for example like this:
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