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Critique By:
ARMANDO ALCÁZAR (K:42316)
5/21/2004 2:59:15 AM
Dan: The picture is excellent and I don't have none criticize for it. With reference to your stepchildren and your friends' of Usefilm godchildren, I can tell you for what you narrate that you are making an excellent work as mother substitute, it is very well that you put them alive food so that they look for it by themself, because that will prepare them for the real life. There is a final part that you will have to make if you want that they are not in danger when coming closer to the humans, I have experience in that because I have returned to the nature several breedings of birds of prey. This can break your heart, but when they can already be worth by themselves you will teach them to fear the humans, frightening them with branches every time that they are brought near you, or requesting to your friends that make it when they come closer to them, this should be made until they have distrust and don't come closer to people, although it sounds hard it is necessary for their own welfare, because nobody knows to what kind of person they will come closer.
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