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Critique By:
Del Metheny (K:25617)
4/4/2006 9:36:19 PM
Hi, your concept of showing just a part of the head form the back is great. I think the perspective here is excellent. Did you consider reducing the light sky in the upper left corner just a little so the eye was not drawn away form the center of the photo. Another alternative would but to crop off a bit of the top. I took the liberty of showing what I mean about reducing the brightness. Let me know what you think. I looked at several of your photos and am impressed. Del.
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Critique By:
Del Metheny (K:25617)
1/18/2006 2:00:44 AM
Great contrast of the large and the small. You got very nice depth by including the one beautiful swan close to the camera to contrast with those further away then including the smaller ducks in the background. Nice composition. Del.
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