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Critique By:
Giuliano Guarnieri (K:35526)
12/23/2006 7:38:07 PM
Hello Jeannette,
I like your old and unusual technics.
A more creative and unique approach to photography, really a nice example of how the artistic language is apart
Bye
GG
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| Photo By: Jeannette Palsa
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Critique By:
Giuliano Guarnieri (K:35526)
10/27/2006 9:30:29 PM
how can you improving?? well, first of all I need to know what the model (or you)would like to achieve from this image. Technically I like very much the texture of the skin, the high key of the overall image , it's very soft but with all the details very well "painted".
From the other side I suppose the model was not relaxed, my first expectation (looking at the global tonality) was to find a "dreamy" image but the model seems to be forced in this position... she's not dreaming , she has only closed eyes and the mouth , in my opinion, seems not natural and relaxed.
Ok.... this is the opinion of a man (me) that is not able to achieve half of your image.... :)
In Italy we are used to say : "who is able ...do, who is not able... do critics" ;)
Bye and thanks for your useful trick on the lights. Next session I'll try with the light behind.
Giuliano
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Critique By:
Giuliano Guarnieri (K:35526)
1/16/2006 11:07:33 AM
This composition is wonderful and the tones of the scene too.
I like the focusing too but it's a little bit unnatural expecially at the bottom (my personal impression) . Did you apply a filter to achieve this result? Also the vignettes... are them the limit of your lens? The result is really cool
Bye
Giuliano
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