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Critique By:
Malak Rashad (K:643)
2/9/2006 10:38:26 PM
hey shaimaa,
very good perspective shot, cery well done!!
i have two comments on it..
the first would be the objects forming the composition, for me it's a little hard to link plates and a ladder - so you kinda get the message that it was organised.. i dont know if this is right or wrong actually but, personally, i prefer things to look natural, like you found them that way (even if it was you who put them together bardo) 
the second, i think it is a tinge over-exposed. you can see that in the ladder on the top left of the picture. the details are burnt sinna..
overall i think it's a very good shot (begad wallahi) and keep experimenting. i've seen the rest of your portfolio, you have a good eye.
keep on shooting!
malak
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