Usefilm Home Sign Up Now! | Log In | Help  

Film and Digital Photography


Wish of a Day's End
Image Title:  Wish of a Day's End
 
 By: Zach Golden  
  Copyright ©2004



 Browse Images
  Recent Pictures
  Todays Pictures
  Yesterdays Pictures
  1 Year Ago Today
  Summary Mode
  All Usefilm Pictures
 
 Image Options
  Staff Choice
  Editors Choice
  Featured Donors
  Featured Photographers
  Featured Photos
  Community Favorites
  Unrated Images
  Featured Critiques
  Critique Only Images
  Critiquer's Corner
  Images With No Critiques
  Random Images
  Panoramic Images
  Images By Country
  Images By Camera
  Images By Lens
  Images By Film/Media
   
 Categories
   
 Projects
   
 Find Member
Name
User ID
 
   

 

Photographer Zach Golden {K:378}
Project #38 Photo Help Camera Model Canon EOS 10D
Categories Landscape
Nature
Still Life
Film Format
Portfolio Poof Flowers
Lens Canon  50 mm f/1.8 II
Uploaded 5/27/2004 Film / Memory Type Lexar 512 40x
    ISO / Film Speed 0
Views 381 Shutter 1/125
Favorites Aperture f/5.6
Critiques 9 Rating
5.82
/ 5 Ratings
Location City - 
State -  MI
Country - United States   United States
About One of my First Pics with my 10d. (let alone A digital Camera) Any suggestions to make this pic stand out. Either via the camera or PS.
Random Pictures By:
Zach
Golden


Farmer's Peppers

With out Fear there is no Love

Showing the way

Dancing Gypsy

Dockside

Northern light 1

none

Farmer's Peachers

none

Big Bad VooDoo Daddy

There are 9 Comments in 1 Pages
  1
Jonathan Truesdale   {K:1599} 5/27/2004
I would really like this picture if the dandelions were more in focus and maybe not quite as highlighted. The highlighting you can fix with PS. The focus part can be fixed somewhat, but it would probably be easier to reshoot it.


Chris Hunter   {K:25631} 5/27/2004
I think your compostion and color is good, I would like to see brighter highlights on the hairs of the dandelion, and because this looks like a dusk shot, darker shadows on the green leaves behind. This is easy in PS, just do a levels adjustment, and move the black slider to the first histogram ridge on the right. Do the same thing for the white histogram slider on the left until your image has proper highlights and shadows. I also sharpened the image and removed any color artifacts.



Steven H   {K:7142} 5/27/2004
Chris, really well done comment, and nicely modification of an already beautiful shot.


Chris Hunter   {K:25631} 5/27/2004
Thanks Steven,
Photoshop can be over-whelming, but my philosophy is to master the tools to produce good-looking images first, and then let the effect stuff come later.

Chris


Alexey Sapa   {K:27168} 5/27/2004
Lovely! Beautifully done! My best wishes! ALexey


Gustavo Eulalio   {K:3774} 5/27/2004
'Suggestions to make this pic stand out'? This picture DOES stand out. Great colors and DOF. The only thing is that the rightmost dandelion were more in-focus. Congrats.


Rebecca Raybon   {K:26645} 5/27/2004
Lovely composition. This pic stands out anyway.. it's beautiful. The recommendations given were good also. I love it either way. The original is a little softer.


Hermen Pen   {K:9117} 5/29/2004
Hi Zach, I like the viewpoint and the colour combination of your image. Suggestions to make it stand out more: some light adjustment (make the image a little darker by reducing the midtones, I would not touch the shadows and highlights as Chris suggested). Via the camera you may achieve this effect through a slight underexposure (You may want to use exposure bracketing for this kind of shots). I agree with Chris that the upper left dandelion could be a little sharper. I can't decide whether the focus is slightly off, or the reduced image size makes it look unsharp. (You can probably judge it from the original larger image). In the latter case, it may be a good idea to sharpen the image using PS (unsharp mask).


eleonora frago   {K:2472} 12/30/2005
little aliens in the sunset, beautiful! :)


  1

 

|  FAQ  |  Terms of Service  |  Donate  |  Site Map  |  Contact Us  |  Advertise  |

Copyright ©2005 Photo Publishing Group, LLC - All Rights Reserved

Elapsed Time:: 0.546875