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Critique By: Joe Johnson  (K:8529) Donor  
6/26/2009 2:55:58 AM

As CC, I'd say good expression, and she overwhelms any background - because her posture and expression are interesting. She's demanding attention. Still there's a lot there and maybe a crop would isolate things better. It's a classic 'A-frame' composition.
        Photo By: Pablo Dylan  (K:61308) Donor

Critique By: stingRay part 2 .  (K:238240)  
6/25/2009 8:36:29 AM

Another beautiful portrait study of the lovely little Ebru my dear Aylin. I love the boldness of the crop/composition and the use of her tiny shoulder and arm with wisps of hair to frame her pretty little face. Gorgeous skin tones, excellent details and the gaze from her eyes would melt the strongest heart. Well done to you sweetie, another great shot. A great big HUUUUUUUUUG for you, a little squeeze for Ebru (for being a wonderful model) and as always my very best wishes to you all.......Uncle Ray
        Photo By: AYLIN ATASAGUN  (K:13063)

Critique By: Anindya Chakraborty  (K:12608)  
6/5/2009 3:18:22 AM

The clouds look ominous and the road takes viewer into the middle of the whole scene. you have done good pp to bring out the detail of the clouds. A very picturesque shot with great light....a very good picture indeed.
        Photo By: Phillip  Minnis   (K:13535)

Critique By: stingRay part 2 .  (K:238240)  
6/12/2009 8:52:53 AM

This is such a beautiful creative intimate portrait study Kes. The finished composure/crop is bold and tight exposing just enough of the bride and her emotions. The mono tones are master class and the delicate soft focus is superb. Very well done to you my friend.
I know you probably have your reasons but I do wish we could get to see more of you here on dear old UF. Great to see your name when it appears. Hope you and your family are all well. My very best wishes to you as always.........Ray
        Photo By: Kes    (K:19761)

Critique By: Anthony Lound  (K:6586) Donor  
6/12/2009 7:33:13 AM

This is one of those fascinating, almost surreal, images which causes one's eye to explore, and to be confused as to the artist's intention. The focus is ambiguous. Yet, it's so beautifully-executed, one's eye flits between the apple and the crenelated tower in search of context and meaning.

One small idea: the tree trunk at right might be lost, since the eye wanders to it uselessly.

Bravo Rashed.

Anthony
        Photo By: Rashed Abdulla  (K:163889) Donor

Critique By: Olga-Eva Krajciova  (K:18874)  
6/12/2009 10:58:23 AM

For today my number one! I love the way how the whole image is composed, I like the real feeling and how documentary image it is. There is a sort of motion captured as well, and the train coming to the station bring s a bit of danger, mostly when I imagine how fast these trains usually drive. The red light on the left is a warning - this can be undesrtand in an easy way - just donīt step to the railways and do not drive, the train is coming...or maybe it brings also some other sort of message - which gives to the image many different sences. The whole image can seem seimple but so creative as well.
best wishes
Olga
        Photo By: Nuno Milheiro  (K:441)

Critique By: Anindya Chakraborty  (K:12608)  
6/4/2009 5:51:29 AM

Excellent color and capture....at first glance I could not see the hummingbird but then saw the beautiful little bird collection honey from the flower. Wish the right side of the flower was not cut, it would have enhanced the image even more. Beautiful.
        Photo By: Arun Madisetti  (K:669)

Critique By: Anindya Chakraborty  (K:12608)  
6/4/2009 6:07:17 AM

Interesting pp in this one, certainly make the image look surreal. The tones are beautiful, too and the softness really adds to drama depicted in the whole image. I like the tree in the center giving strong point in the image.
        Photo By: luis pereira  (K:22510) Donor

Critique By: Petal Wijnen  (K:50944) Donor  
6/4/2009 7:49:13 AM

Fine architectural shot!!! Great in B&W, wonderful tones. Excellent POV/composition... the way you took this shot... at first glance the dome looks like a cone sticking out instead of going in... well done!!!
        Photo By: Martijn Leensen  (K:72)

Critique By: Anindya Chakraborty  (K:12608)  
6/4/2009 10:19:58 AM

Athens, Greece....read so many stories on history about them and dreamed as well when I was a child. This picture is very calm yet so much going in it. Does this reflect your mind? I like this poetic picture and you did well to keep in it bw. All emotions.
best
Anindya
        Photo By: Olga Melissa  (K:20264)

Critique By: Anindya Chakraborty  (K:12608)  
6/4/2009 10:13:56 AM

I like the expression on his face...very unique. I think there is some room for improvement in terms of tones in this picture. Tones seems to be bit flat to me. You have a wonderful portfolio Olga.
regards
Anindya
        Photo By: Olga Melissa  (K:20264)

Critique By: Yamil Saenz  (K:12454) Donor  
6/3/2009 1:24:46 PM

Re-posted.
Brigitte R. wrote about ths image.
Brigitte R. {K:20447} 6/3/2009
As if it isn't challenging enough to capture a bird perched so it looks perfectly posed in an image, plus to get it pin-point sharp - you even get them in the act of feeding in the wild! I am absolutely stunned by your consistantly better than perfect images! I sure hope that Audubon Society and others are looking at your work. Very, very nice! 7/7
        Photo By: Yamil Saenz  (K:12454) Donor

Critique By: Dan Wilson  (K:20333) Donor  
5/20/2009 3:40:53 AM

Great work here Tim, and congrats on the well deserved award for this shot. I hope your camera didn't get too wet. I love the lighting and also the lack of it in this shot and how the two together create a stunning and moody feeling and atmosphere to this shot. The colours and exposure here are stunning, well done
        Photo By: Tim  Schumm  (K:28854)

Critique By: ron shufflebarger  (K:490) Donor  
5/20/2009 2:29:52 AM

nice tonal values. One looks at it and almost wonders if you could get rid of the tree line all together and just have structure, that it probably would be a more powerful image. The treeline, even though faint, distracts me and doesn't add anything---ron s.
        Photo By: ANANDA NIYOGI  (K:4996)

Critique By: Arup Bhattacharya  (K:3284)  
5/20/2009 5:35:37 AM

Lovely shot .. nice perspective.. allow me to share my thoughts.. personally I feel , inclusion of a single human figure in motion would make the whole composition look more lively..Once again .. this is never a judgment..its only my personal thought.
        Photo By: Phillip  Minnis   (K:13535)

Critique By: Dan Wilson  (K:20333) Donor  
5/3/2009 11:59:42 AM

Wow Dave, another stunning shot. I love this freeze in time you have captured, the player look a tiny bit sad by the expression and looks to be deep in thought. I really love the slight bluring in his arm and hand, it really adds to the mood of the shot, and really gives us the impression that he is indeed playing his heart out. Great details and DOF, I think this in black and white is the perfect choice
        Photo By: Dave Stacey  (K:137901) Donor

Critique By: Nick Karagiaouroglou  (K:126224) Donor  
5/3/2009 1:03:32 PM

Very descriptive shot of not only the fantastic details of that fantastic city, but also of the special atmosphere that it has when under clouds. The colors and the shapes seem to merge with the presence of that muted light, which provides a special sense for the age and the meaning of Florence in its historical civilizatory role.

I can't be really detached in this comment, since I was standing exactly there, at Piazza Michelangelo, trying to get some images of the city, but still the enormous DoF and the great details are above all suspicion here. The gradual and subtle increase of the haze toward the depth enhances the huge space of the image even more.

Only as a question here: Could a bit more contrast do good? I adjusted the levels for that (attachment) but then the subtle diffuse light of the image became much weaker. So, which of both possibilities do you think matches better the view? I think yours comes much closer to that atmosphere.

Cheers!

Nick
        Photo By: Dave Stacey  (K:137901) Donor

Critique By: David .  (K:-572)  
3/26/2009 12:46:01 AM

Kinda hard to understand why this picture hasn't gotten more attention. Excellent landscape that I'd be hard pressed to find any fault with. Love the subtle combination of leading lines and S curve. Very good eye.
        Photo By: Sei Tchiez  (K:71)

Critique By: Nick Karagiaouroglou  (K:126224) Donor  
3/21/2009 12:22:23 PM

It has a very "trainy" mood indeed, Andre, in the sense that cargo will not only follow the well known "photogenic" routes that appeal to the typical tourost, but it will follow many routes that have a different kind of photogenity than what appears to be "nice" to the lazy eyes of the monotonous "aesthetic rules".

So, thanks to your good focus, I see the good details of the rail world as it expands to the depth between machines, vegetation, and rather "dirty" colors, if I can call them like that. There is also some kind of refraction-like effect on the edges of the objects on the image that suggests humidity just like after a heavy rain. It certainly adds much to the athmosphere. It makes it very very real.

The composition is again pretty well balanced for me. I wouldn't add or subtract anything at all.

Only a small idea about that. Do you also notice a more "closed" kind of view by cloning of the small piece of sky near the top left? (Attachment).

Cheers!

Nick
        Photo By: Andre Denis  (K:61492)

Critique By: Anindya Chakraborty  (K:12608)  
3/26/2009 3:53:33 AM

excellent street photography this! The street patten looks very nice and the position of the men in this picture also adds to whole composition in the frame ....overall an excellent street photograph....
regards
anindya
        Photo By: Linh Ha  (K:117)

Critique By: Roderik Koenders  (K:2731)  
10/6/2008 12:07:09 PM

Hoi Teunis,

Great shot. I really like the colour depth with the bright green of the grass, blue in the sky and warm tints on the mill.

I don't know how much post-processing you have done on this picture but maybe you can enhance the colour depth by removing the slight red tint from the grass, that way it might pop even more? Just a thought though.
        Photo By: Teunis Haveman  (K:36857)

Critique By: Roderik Koenders  (K:2731)  
10/6/2008 1:27:49 PM

Ania,

Great shot. I really like how you darkened the edges a bit to keep the focus on the two central figures. You have used the low depth of field very well, with the high aperture value. What ISO did you shoot at?

I think you already darkened the sky a bit already, but I think it is still a bit too overpoweringly bright. Also the figure on the right draws my eye away from the main subjects.

The composition is very nice though, with the big sister being protective of her little brother. I really love how you managed to get the trust of these kids to shoot them in this way. Is this a street photography shot or are these kids you know? If the former I would love to hear how you approached the situation and got your shots. I am experimenting with street photography myself a little, and it always makes me a bit nervous to just go and take picture of people :-).
        Photo By: Ania Blazejewska  (K:24026) Donor

Critique By: Paul de Beukelaar  (K:19851)  
10/6/2008 1:30:18 PM

Hi Pim,
I agree with Phillip about the pose of Janneke's leg. The previous B&W portrait was such natural and so excellent, but here I notice immediately what Phillip already clearly described.
Another thing I notice is, however I can't read her thoughts, she was willing to pose but also she seems to be maybe bored and somewhat impatient. It is clearly visible from the tension seen around mouth and neck.

Lighting however is really perfect,
vriendelijke groet,
Paul
        Photo By: Pim de Ruijter  (K:1786)

Critique By: Nick Karagiaouroglou  (K:126224) Donor  
10/6/2008 1:46:42 PM

A very very authentic and original idea, Ian! It has both "order" and at the same time "disordering" for me. The restricted palette adds much to its abstract power. The texture on the wood looks nice too, but above all I find that kind of "diffuse light glow" over the whole image very interesting. Is that the result of the reflections on the water?

Another possible crop would be like on the attachment, but then it loses much of that abstract look, doesn't it?

Cheers!

Nick
        Photo By: Ian McIntosh  (K:42170)

Critique By: Bob Brins  (K:4076)  
10/6/2008 12:25:09 PM

The image transcends the subject matter. I've done similar work at Coney Island. But, my images are about the place. This peaceful moment is everywhere. I don't know if it's seeing or skill but, I very much like the lighting that keeps the figure from blending into the (back) ground.

Bob
        Photo By: Artan  Korenica  (K:232)

Critique By: Roger Skinner  (K:75036) Donor  
10/5/2008 10:24:38 PM

beautiful girl but the pose is wrong.. her legs have disappeared so if you crop the top out that might help but in all seriousness I would re pose her... try this too last thing you do before you depress the shutter button is to run your eye round the periphery of the viewfinder, this has two effects 1 You see the odd things about the shot.. ie trees poking into peoples heads and stuff like that and second you detach from the centre of interest the thing you are hot to photograph and simply see an image as the camera sees it. I cropped it according to my taste in order to tidy it up, but it would be better cropped in camera so you dont lose image size and so on.. hope you dont mind
        Photo By: Srna Stankovic  (K:141247) Donor

Critique By: John Hatz  (K:156912)  
10/4/2008 11:09:17 AM

Absolutely excellent shot, silhouettes are very nice... and of course a silhouette on a very interesting subject like a man trying to work hardly on the....top of the world (kidding about the highs and how I'm scared about...) is surly something very nice... excellent the way to tightly frame the subject as also the way you 'use' the metallic parts and the flag into the frame... amazing... that must be on a boat...even I had a different idea firstly about a man working on a contracted building... but the flag gives the reality about what going on here... unique place anyway to seat a man!!! (again no way to be there...hahaaha)
be well Tommaso!
        Photo By: Tommaso Di Falco  (K:23744)

Critique By: Nick Karagiaouroglou  (K:126224) Donor  
9/29/2008 10:42:09 AM

The lighting and the coloring caught the atmosphere very well, in a combination of real view and a look at one of those old posters whose colors get washed out by rain and sunlight. In this sense it has also much of the "aged" look that seems to be ideal for preserving vague memories. Very good details and perspective with a great DoF that adds much of that "could touch it" kind of look and feel.

On some places there is a slight overexposure, like for example on the tower of the church, but this enhances the sense for light in this case. The whole balance remains intact - there is no too much or too little here.

Very good work.

Nick
        Photo By: Orazio Minnella  (K:48355)

Critique By: Riny Koopman  (K:77611) Donor  
6/29/2008 3:33:17 PM

We live in an increasingly complex world that challenges us every day with a wide range of disturbing issues that are difficult for children to understand and for adults to explain. We believe this Web site can help by offering practical, concrete tips and techniques for talking easily and openly with young children ages,very intresting human portrait,be well my friend,riny
        Photo By: srimanta ray  (K:2710)

Critique By: Gary Hill  (K:53446) Donor  
6/15/2008 8:19:15 PM

Well spotted, Stan. It would be a good abstract even without the loaded meaning. It's hard to say whether mono is best for this image. I suspect keeping colour might lose the crosses, in which case it has to be mono.
Regards, Gary
        Photo By: Stan  Hill  (K:27911) Donor


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