Here you could have moved the model to the right a couple of feet so her head didn't interfere with the bottom loop of the "Y". it would have better balance too. And the writing needed a little more room especially on the right. But again nice model and nice pose for the thought this conveys. And again the contrast is a little high in this image. Though that may be a scanning and posting problem inherent on the web. But I would like to see a little detail in the clothing of the model. And the bricks are a little hot. Great idea though.