Pictures of Under the Overpass - Maxxum XTSI Camera

Photographer	Marty Provost {K:1760}
Project	#12 Dramatic B&W Shadows	Camera Model	Maxxum XTSI
Categories		Film Format
Portfolio		Lens	100
Uploaded	1/11/2002	Film / Memory Type	TMAX 400
		ISO / Film Speed	0
Views	270	Shutter
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/0
Critiques	4	Rating	Critique Only Image
Location	City - State - Country -
About	Another shot from my first outdoor shoot.

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james mickelson {K:7344} 1/12/2002

Hi Marty. I love the pose with those big boots sticking out there. But the model is lost in the expanse of white concrete. Crop this image severly. Make this model much larger in the frame. The image is about the model unless it's an ad for concrete. And the concrete is very hot. Way too bright. I like the shadow coming down at that angle. It may be the scan and post but the image seems a little out of focus. Just a few things like this and you have a winner.

Ted Williams {K:324} 1/12/2002

The crop works for me. I love the simplicity of the positioning and the diagonal darkness.

Marty Provost {K:1760} 3/11/2002

Here's a rescanning of this now that I have a decent scanner. I think the difference is amazing. What do you think?

Daniel L Quigley-Skillin {K:1350} 3/11/2002

Marty-

Definately a noteworty difference :) Your shots are much more crisp.

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