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al shaikh
{K:15790} 1/19/2003
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Somebody is getting quite a bit better :)
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heather martino
{K:3642} 1/19/2003
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This is great framing & light! (& a scary-looking bikini!)
I would be tempted to clone out those hairs at top right.
H:)
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Elizabeth Wargo van Hulst
{K:434} 1/20/2003
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This is beautiful!
I just went through your entire portfolio :) Quite the amount of progress! Awesome!
I adore the lighting on this! WoW you must be proud!
Is this one light?
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 1/21/2003
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Thank you all for the feedback. I have since rubber stamped out the hairs at the top right. Thanks for the tip Heather. The lighting on this one was window light coming in just before sunset. I took a couple like that then duplicated the lighting with 1 strobe after sunset.
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Neia Frank
{K:478} 1/25/2003
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beautiful Image.Great detail,tones and composition.
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Marc Gougenheim
{K:5398} 2/23/2003
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Nice light here, and nice outfit too... I like cutting people in pieces as well, Marty, but I'm not convinced about the crop in this case... A bit more at the bottom seems welcome... Maybe the arm falling along the body wasn't a bad idea either in fact, and finally, on the right, the crop just falls at the wrong place imo. I don't know how to explain why, but basically, I feel your cropped either too much or too little, and lost some grace along the way... Regards.
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Deepti DCunha
{K:891} 5/9/2003
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beautiful..and sensual
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Kim Culbert
{K:37013} 12/11/2003
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Marty, I just wanted to tell you that I keep coming back to this shot... I find it intriging, sensual and fantastically composed. Losing the hair in the top right would make this perfect, although it's pretty darn close right now. I've noticed that you haven't been posting in a while... and I'm missing shots like these.
Excellent light sculpting both body and bikini.
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