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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185017} 1/18/2006
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Hi Chuck, Even though I find the composition very creative and original, it does make the image itself a bit difficult to assess. I think it does create a very strong "vortex" / zooming in feel towards the vanishing point of this shot, and as a frame it works well. I'd be rather looking at the photo, though. It looks nice enough, and the composition, allowing alot of space for the rail track is good, Also, letting the rails intersect with the two lower corners and also using that element of intersection in the top left makes the image pretty strong. I wonder what would happen if you had construct the frame in such a way that the corners black border would also intersect with the imaginary line of the rails and the roof. Hope you see what I mean.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Chuck Freeman
{K:13322} 1/18/2006
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The Borders are Too large. Attached is the way I would have reposted.
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Abandoned Tracks: Hartwell, Ga. |
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Chuck Freeman
{K:13322} 1/18/2006
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Thank You HUGO. See original Version attached under your comments.
Chuck Freeman
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185017} 1/18/2006
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Yeah. Definitely a nice shot. Interesting composition too.. Thanks for showing, Chuck!
Cheers,
Hugo
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Bradley Prue
{K:30312} 1/18/2006
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You have managed to make isolation and desolation quite pleasing to the eye! Says a lot about the talent behind the lens..
...Brad
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Chuck Freeman
{K:13322} 1/19/2006
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Thanks Brad-I needed that today.
I will look over your body of work. Still wish I could go inside of asylum or old prison. ( lol)
ONLY AS A PHOTOGRAPHER!!!
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Judi Liosatos
{K:34029} 1/20/2006
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I really like your choice of gallery framing for this image. The image itself is very interesting.
Judi
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andree lerat
{K:16818} 1/30/2006
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I think that the framing for this shot is original and set off the starl composition very well.
Thank you for leaving a comment in my portfolio. I think that your portfolio is very nice. There are many other photographers who rarely get comments although their work is spectacular. So we are not alone. Cheers, Andree
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