Pictures of untitled - Sony Cyber Shot Camera

Photographer	Jacqui {K:1283}
Project	#49 Dramatic Portrait	Camera Model	Sony Cyber Shot
Categories	Fashion Portrait Nature	Film Format	N/A
Portfolio		Lens	N/A
Uploaded	1/25/2006	Film / Memory Type	N/A
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Views	189	Shutter
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/
Critiques	2	Rating	Critique Only Image
Location	City - Longmeadow State - MA Country - United States
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Alison DuFlon

{K:36231} 1/25/2006

I like your perspective and the pose you have taken, she has that far away daydreaming look.
My only suggestion and I hope you don't mind my would be to lighten it. I first lightened her face only and then the whole thing a bit. Alison

lightening

Mark Julian

{K:35715} 1/25/2006

Dear Jackie, IMHO I like the version you put up. I looked at it on my MAC 17" powerbook LCD screen and it looks fine. I think it's meant to be a bit moody and you did a good job. Keep on shooting, you have a great eye and always do a really good job on your composition. Take care, Mark

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