I like your perspective and the pose you have taken, she has that far away daydreaming look. My only suggestion and I hope you don't mind my would be to lighten it. I first lightened her face only and then the whole thing a bit. Alison
Dear Jackie, IMHO I like the version you put up. I looked at it on my MAC 17" powerbook LCD screen and it looks fine. I think it's meant to be a bit moody and you did a good job. Keep on shooting, you have a great eye and always do a really good job on your composition. Take care, Mark