Pictures of S & M - Olympus E-10 Camera

Photographer	Ciana Worme {K:6549}
Project	N/A	Camera Model	Olympus E-10
Categories	Portrait Children People	Film Format	Digital JPEG
Portfolio		Lens	fixed
Uploaded	1/25/2006	Film / Memory Type	Digital
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Views	120	Shutter
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/
Critiques	2	Rating	Critique Only Image
Location	City - State - Country - United States
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Dwight Parks {K:4423} 1/26/2006

Ciane, First off this is a pair of lovely young ladies and I think you captured one being very playful and perhaps the older one just a little tired or maybe wanting to do something else at the time, but to me she just doesn't look like she's into this. The sharpness is fine and the way you composed is okay, but the fence to the right is very distracting. They both have lovely skin tones except the little one on the left has a greenish tint under her cheek and down her neck. Perhaps it's a color cast by a object close by or reflection from another surface. Your portfolio is wonderful and maybe this in b/w would be neater. Overall a nice snapshot. Regards, Dwight

Susie OConnor {K:34798} 1/26/2006

They are cute Ciana. Dwight has a good critique, but the fence doesn't bother me. Perhaps just a little tighter crop would take care of that. I like the pose with the heads close together. Nice one.
Susie

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