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Pablo Dylan
{K:52663} 3/5/2006
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Wow che occhi...bellissimo ritratto!
Pablo
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David Hofmann
{K:23827} 3/5/2006
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ok you want a more detailed critique...
well, first of all you really shouldn't stay up until 1:30 am and work on your photos :) lol
Its a cute moment and I like her expression. I don't like too much how her hair bleeds into the pitch black background. In the previous photo you uploaded we can see how beautiful her hair is. Its a little sad this is lost in this portrait. I'd crop off a little of the top as I personally think the air above her doesn't add to the composition.
Her eyes show really beautiful here. Bright and with a nice catch light. Overall I'd love the light to be more interesting/directional.
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Diego Bullita
{K:14501} 3/5/2006
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hi Dina,
optimal portrait, comp'liments
diego
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Michael Grace-Martin
{K:10283} 3/5/2006
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The clarity of colors and detail are wonderful. I agree with David about the hair disappearing into the background. I think I would crop a little from the top and the bottom to make it a more "intimate" portrait (with less extraneous photo real estate). All in all, though, it's a appealing portrait..:)
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Kambiz K
{K:37420} 3/5/2006
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very nice image of your daughter.
Would be better to use other background as her hair mixed with the background.
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c c
{K:13446} 3/5/2006
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my kinda shot! LOVE this...so sweet, so fresh, so REAL
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Pat Fruen
{K:12073} 3/6/2006
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I just love this little face.
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Pat Fruen
{K:12073} 3/6/2006
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Oops, I just noticed that you want a real and detailed critique. Well, I see what they mean about the hair, although I didn't notice it at first because I was drawn to her eyes. I love her natural expression and what seems to be a bit of a dirty face...real. I'd probably prefer this in black and white, but that's just me.
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Mort Gage
{K:2740} 3/6/2006
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i really like this vibrant real shot.
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WAEL HAMDAN
{K:7476} 3/6/2006
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very nice image ..... main thing is the look
regard
wael
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:99493} 3/6/2006
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Dina:
Pull out her hair with directional lighting, or maybe some low backlighting to define it if you'd like. I do see some strength in that approach. But this lovely little model has the perfect expression and you have captured it superbly. I love this shot.
--Regards,
Doyle I
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