Pictures of Bill Kaschner - Nollie Big Spin - Canon Digital Rebel Camera

Photographer	Tobiah Deutsch {K:2432}
Project	#42 Moody Landscape	Camera Model	Canon Digital Rebel
Categories	People Digital Sports	Film Format	Digital JPEG
Portfolio	Action	Lens	Tamron 28-80 F2.8
Uploaded	4/12/2006	Film / Memory Type	Unity 512MB CF
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Views	276	Shutter	1/125
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/2.8
Critiques	2	Rating	Pending / 0 Ratings
Location	City - Butler State - WI Country - United States
About	Ok Skate Rats... what do you think of this one? Critiques please... Cream City Skatepark Training grounds for the STARS Butler, WI (suburban Milwaukee)

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David Biesel {K:80} 5/3/2006

You asked for it. I think you over use the saturation sometimes. The photo could also be framed better, one thing I always remeber from school is a picture should make the eyes move around and never get stuck. My eyes get stuck on the shoes in this one. Please take the time to give me some critiques.

Tobiah Deutsch {K:2432} 5/5/2006

Dave,

Thanks man... I appreciate the input. Overuse the saturation. I will agree that I due boost it a tad... 10 points max at any time. I'll tink about that a little more from here on out.

I guess what really gets me about this photo is the trick itself. I'm not sure the timing is right or that the "style" is spot on. Its a hard trick on a steep bank, but I'm not sure that comes through.

I also think that I blew out the highlights a little here. I've been having trouble with one of my flashes and its been hard to get things just so.

I'll take some time to give you my input as well.

Thanks Dave.

Peace!

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