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Yazeed Al Ghuraibi
{K:4558} 4/30/2006
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Great abstract shot
maybe if you make the box in the right will be bateer ?
Yazeed
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:184670} 4/30/2006
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Hi Martijn,
Bold, simple yet with a good appeal. Looks just a bit on the soft side, and I'm a bit curious about the distortion, I think the geometrical patterns and the impact of this photo could maybe be a bit stronger if you straightened the lines in it. I do like the idea though, and the simplicity of the scene is striking. Very good idea!
Cheers,
Hugo
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martijn wams
{K:6156} 4/30/2006
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Hi hugo,
I had the focus on the box and the stones themselves are already verry soft looking themselves. I'm guessing you're asking about the distortion in the red color in the wall. That's in the bricks themselves, they varied in color in the wall. And for straightening the lines, I agree with you. But the wall is on a slight decline in the road and this was about the straightest I could get it. Thank you for your kind comments.
Regards,
Martijn
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Paolo Corradini
{K:50745} 4/30/2006
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so minimal like an abstract ..i read your answer I understand the not perfect orizzontal lines.
well done
PAOLO
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Pablo Dylan
{K:53698} 5/5/2006
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Minimal.
Excellent Shot!!
Pablo
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Thilo Bayer
{K:50301} 5/30/2006
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Great simplified image. Maybe a little of-centering of the door would increase the tension?
Thilo
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robert jedrusik
{K:755} 10/28/2006
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simple wall, simple box and... immensely photo
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