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Ron Wilson
{K:18161} 5/17/2006
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Great portrait Angela. The subject must know you, she is so relaxed. It's a beautiful capture of a nice moment in time. On the technical side...your levels could do with some tweaking. The whites are a little blown out at the bottom and the detail may not be able to be recovered. The crop that you chose is very tight, I'm guessing for a reason. Was there something there that you wanted out? Hope this helps, Regards Ron.
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Mohamed Elmaymony
{K:1118} 5/17/2006
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nice work but i think that you have another good work in your photos so 6/7 for this .
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Howie Mudge
{K:23979} 5/18/2006
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As this is a CC I'll try to help as much as I can. Firstly for me, I'm not a fan of sepia unless it's relevant to something very old. So for this capture, a black and white conversion or colour version would be better imho. The tilt to the head is nice but it would have been a little better imho also if she had been a little more side on. The hair on her left eye is neither covering the eye or fulling revealing the eye which does distract just a little.
All in all though, she has a very nice smile, expressive eyes and good even lighting through out the portrait. For me, its good but small changes would improve it so it's a 5/7 from me. Hope this helps.
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Angela Freed
{K:10061} 5/18/2006
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Thanks tons Howie. That was one of the most honest and helpful critique that I've ever gotten. I really appreciated it. I see what your saying on the sepia. I sometimes just like the warm feeling of it though I see your point. The hair in the eye was also bothering me but I couldn't fix it post so it will have to be something I keep my eye on in the futur. Thanks!
Angela
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Trish McCoy
{K:20979} 5/18/2006
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I think this would look better in bw tones then this light sepia. the thing I think that bugs me here is the shadows on her cheek from her hair. everything else I like. you did good work here.
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Claude Tenot
{K:9875} 5/18/2006
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sweety sweety ;-))...beautiful eyes with sunglasses ...your level increase...
(be careful with the bottom..... try to forget white shirt for a moment)
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Gust@vo Sch3v3rin
{K:121677} 5/21/2006
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Muy buen macro, muy agradable en sepia.
Felicitaciones!
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