Pictures of White Lotus - Canon EOS 20D Camera

Photographer	Bob Brins {K:3884}
Project	#29 B&W Flower	Camera Model	Canon EOS 20D
Categories	Florals Photoart Nature	Film Format
Portfolio	Loti	Lens	Canon EF-S 17-85
Uploaded	6/4/2006	Film / Memory Type	Digital
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Views	194	Shutter	1/250
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/8.0
Critiques	2	Rating	Pending / 0 Ratings
Location	City - New York State - NY Country - United States
About	The comming of summer, white bright and carressing.

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Bob Wallace {K:698} 7/4/2006

You didn't post a very large version of this image so it's a bit hard to really tell what's going on. But from what I can see you might have overexposed slightly and lost some petal detail. Or perhaps it went away during editing. (Or perhaps I just can't see it in this version.

Try cropping off a bit from the bottom and more from the top. I think that will eliminate some of the distraction and make the flower more dominate.

Bob Brins {K:3884} 7/5/2006

Thanks, I do tend to print and post small images. Printing small is because I like the retained quality and the ability of the viewer to hold the image easily in the hand.

As to the cropping, my intent was to indicate the larger sceme of the garden and its beauty.

I have posted another version, cropped to emphasize the flower. I've also treated tonally different.

Thanks for you time and consideration.

Bob

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