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After School
Image Title:  After School
 
 By: Joggie van Staden  
  Copyright ©2006



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Photographer Joggie van Staden {K:41275}
Project #53 Tribute to Arnold Newman Camera Model Nikon D70
Categories Portrait
People
Film Format Digital JPEG High
Portfolio Portraiture
People
African
Lens Nikon  28-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AF
Uploaded 7/5/2006 Film / Memory Type Lexar  1GB
    ISO / Film Speed
Views 292 Shutter 1/125
Favorites Aperture f/11
Critiques 28 Rating
5.63
/ 4 Ratings
Location City -  Ermelo
State -  MPUMALANGA
Country - South Africa   South Africa
About A young boy sitting around in front of his home, waiting for his friends to come home from school. Taken on a Highveld farm near Ermelo, South Africa. The children of the farmworkers on the farm attend a farm-school close by. They stay in primitive housing made of a wooden framework plastered with clay and decorated according to the Ndebele tribe tradition. Uncropped, minimal adjustments in PS
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There are 28 Comments in 1 Pages
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Paolo Corradini   {K:51722} 7/5/2006
it's beautiful this child and his colours all around a great reportage-portrait.
well done
POALO


Rashed Abdulla   {K:154599} 7/5/2006
Perfect exposure here and with wonderful moment and composition, very great details and colors, all of the best my friend


Randy Lorance   {K:24958} 7/5/2006
As much as I liked the previous image and thought the chicken added to it's composition, it's not needed here and this is probebly the stronger shot. Nice work

Randy


Paul's Photos   {K:34954} 7/5/2006
excellent capture.. the photo tells so much.. the colors are great. Even though the home is poor in construction... it is rich in family and tradition. The paintings show the pride... great work


Larry Fosse   {K:65815} 7/5/2006
Colorful & emontional....excellent portrait & journalistic capture


Carlen Schmidt   {K:7061} 7/5/2006
Composition is great here. I agree with everyone else how this photo definitely tells a story.


Luis Limchiu   {K:3168} 7/5/2006
very nice colors Joggie and nicely composed. I see the tires and rocks on the roof, we also have that here- to keep the roof inplace when the storm comes.


Jo T   {K:2218} 7/5/2006
excellent image Joggie


Danny Brannigan   {K:16246} 7/5/2006
An oustanding image and very informative. The composition is great and the richness of the colours is excellent.


Kiarang Alaei   {K:49060} 7/5/2006
Wow, this is realy a great documentary childhood shot, bravo!


andree lerat   {K:16734} 7/5/2006
Primitive but creative. Love all the detail you've included in the composition. :) Andree


Marion Luijten   {K:6172} 7/5/2006
Excellent capture, Joggie! Love the coloyrs and composition.
Marion


Dave Arnold   {K:55613} 7/5/2006
Great eye, Joggie. I really like the objects on the roof but this would also work very well if you cropped just below the red roof beam and just below the stoop, still leaving in the larger rock. Very interesting photo the way it is, though.

Best wishes,
Dave
Dave


Manu     {K:13094} 7/5/2006
Well put together shot, Joggie....the space above the boys head gives it great weight. My only comment might be to straighten the left red area and maybe include more of the top...I feel I want to know more about whats above him on the roof.

Great color

Manu


Jinggoy Montenejo   {K:7461} 7/6/2006
Hi Joggie, Very well seen image! The bright red 'artwork' on the wall the bare footed little boy and the rocks on the roof tell the story of hardship but also very colorful traditions. I think you can also play around with framing, as Manu commented or also possibly take out the roof and frame him with the red outline.


Jeanette Hägglund   {K:59985} 7/6/2006
The first thing i see is the decoration on the wall, eyecatching. Nice capture of the boy´s wait and his expression!

Jeanette


Marcus Armani   {K:35759} 7/6/2006
very strong scene, the colors of the wall really make the subject stand out togeather they make a great portrait


Joggie van Staden   {K:41275} 7/6/2006
Thanks Manu - with the angle I took the shot, thats about everything you would see on the roof, just out of focus clatter in the background. Thanks for your meaningful comments!
Joggie


Joggie van Staden   {K:41275} 7/6/2006
Thanks Dave - agree about the cropping although I originally included it to give perspective on the boy's surroundings. For that it works well I think. Will play with the cropping and reload in future for a more graphic/abstract approach. Thanks again for the interest and meaningfull comments.
Joggie


Roberto Arcari Farinetti   {K:178235} 7/6/2006
really dramatic hard life..

FANTASTIC, and perfect also for the project..

cheers
roby

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Doyle D. Chastain   {K:99839} 7/6/2006
Nicely done Joggie . . . a journalistic AND artistic shot very well rendered.

Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~


stingRay part 2 .   {K:139396} 7/6/2006
A wonderful candid portrait with beautiful tones and excellent details and textures, I think I might have cropped out that sliver of red clay on the left or corrected the horizontal a tad and left a red frame. A great shot though, well done to you. Warm regards....Ray


Petal Wijnen   {K:47835} 7/6/2006
Fantastic candid shot Joggie! The expression on the boy's face is precious, looks like he's far, far away...!! Wonderful colors, details and composition... well done!! BTW I love the 'clutter' on the roof, it tells a story of its own... ;-D


Don Loseke   {K:32503} 7/6/2006
Very well composed and wonderful color and detail. Well done Joggie. Don.


Yoshiyuki Tanaka   {K:13580} 7/8/2006
I DO like this image a lot!!! It has a story, it is rich in patterns and colours and it is WARM! That boy makes the shot so human!
YT


Aykaan K   {K:13228} 7/14/2006
très bon regard...


David Tasker   {K:4194} 11/20/2006
Joggie the concept (and composition) here is similar to my "Noon Prayer" http://www.usefilm.com/Image.asp?ID=1212636
Like you I chose to put my subject in the lower left of teh image frame and allow the surroundings to dominate. What is does is to actually drawer the view to the person. I congratulate you on the clarity and sharpenss. My noon prayer photo was difficult in that we were not allowed to use a tripod and the Mosque was very low light. This is a super image and great study


Nicole Marcisz   {K:10163} 12/1/2006
brilliant street portrait Joggie. perfect composition, wonderful rich color.

cheers,
nicole


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