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Paolo Corradini
{K:49832} 7/14/2006
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nice portrait i like the pastel colors inside the unusual angle form you..i don't like the cut of the hand in the crop..but probably it's your choice.
greetings
Paolo
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narabia
{K:9770} 7/14/2006
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yes, it works, closing eyes helps...
you left your photo to CC, so expecting a critique... must be told that the composition is not perfect. It is good that you took it from lower level, i.e that the camera was at the level of man's face, but IMHO taking photo from a side would work better. i mean to show the wall disappearing in the distance (of course if there was such), showing the man from the side with his hands freely left on knees.
And the worst part - cut fingers. I do not think it was your intention. I think it was accidental because you were focused on his face, on the calmness.
And ... at the end.. reading your "abouts" one may forget about the ohoto and little mistakes.
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Melisa Meyers
{K:9492} 7/14/2006
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Great character and I love the cracks that add texture and an idea about what the surroundings might be. I do agree about the fingers and I also think that the darkness of the photo hides the details of his face. His expression captures a calm rest but more facial details would also give a story telling effect of the life that he has lived. Wonderful bit of information you also shared - I unfortuanately work 8 hours a day infront of my computer and it is very hard on the eyes.
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Alicia Popp
{K:81550} 7/15/2006
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GRacias por tus consejos In, esv verdad lo que dices... yno presentas un estupendo retrato... felicitaciones!
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{K:29358} 7/19/2006
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Ms Meyers:
First, rub your hands together until they feel warm (about 15 to 20 seconds). Then place your cupped hands over your closed eyes, being careful not to touch your eyes with the palms of your hands. The fingers of each hand should overlap and rest gently on the center of your forehead. Don't create any unnecessary pressure on your face. If your arms get tired, rest your elbows on a table.
Sit quietly for one to two minutes with your hands over your eyes. The more relaxed you become, the blacker the darkness you will see with your eyes closed.
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{K:29358} 7/19/2006
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Sra. Popp
Gracias... y yo spero todo es bueno con usted
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{K:29358} 7/19/2006
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Frau Kozlowska
Now CC may also be meant as a CarbonCopy... and so will have to submit a slightly better capture... with the gentleman's eyes... open!
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{K:29358} 7/19/2006
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Sr Corradini
The chopped hand was caused that it was but a quick capture... and as such regreted
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Nicole Marcisz
{K:10160} 7/28/2006
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I love the composition and the textures but I do wish it were brighter and showed more light on the man.
cheers,
nicole
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ragia saleh
{K:314} 7/31/2006
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i wont to congratulat you for this photo i like it very much , i think it's very egyption ,
good luck.
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ana ribeiro
{K:21290} 9/21/2006
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hi! you still here!
thats nice to find an old friend, this photoof yurs is very beautyful i think its a shame his hand being croped...but its ok!
saludos
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