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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:177029} 7/28/2006
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so.. a dark still life composed in the galss.. it seem a black-glass.. just a tones for the old-tribute
really nice
roby
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Kes
{K:18221} 7/28/2006
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Hi Phillip! I looked at this for quite awhile...success!
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Sunset Man
{K:10536} 7/28/2006
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Dear Phil,
First of all, ... I like these unique geometric shapes and somewhat arranged so abstractly ... that's for sure!
But ... (and there are always a few aren't there?) ... this is what I don't like:
The smoky almost monochrome effect is lacking contrast ...
The horizontal plane is most defintely a bit off ... Yes/No?
Back to positives:
The electrical appearance in the trylon is descently noteworthy ...
The title is most appropriate ...
Thanks for sharing and I hope you don't mind the rework attached ...
Let's discuss it if you wish ... Okay?
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Phillip Minnis
{K:13078} 7/28/2006
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Nice composition, Phil! Well done!
Cheers
Phil
PS I attempted my first glass shots today. If you have time, let me know what you think.
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Riny Koopman
{K:56637} 7/28/2006
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Like the way you gaught this compo,shalom,riny
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Phillip Cohen
{K:9520} 7/28/2006
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Douglas, thanks for the input. Yes the original does look a bit flat to me now that I am looking at it on a properly calibrated monitor. The image I have had a slightly blue cast to it where yours is totally black and white, that may help a bit as well in tricking the eye into seeing more contrast, not sure. I will see if I can find the original film and scan a new version of it. Unfortunately the trylon was sold on ebay a few years ago, will have to see if I can find another. It was made by Bacarrat Crytal and was quite epxensive so not very common these days. I still have the crystal cube and sphere though.
Thanks for the input,
Phil
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Maurizio Ubaldini
{K:1856} 8/12/2006
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Hi Phillip, nice composition,it lacks contrast of a little, but so it has an appearance of old photograph
hat does not displease me
Maurizio
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Rashed Abdulla
{K:152890} 8/13/2006
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The arrangement for this capture is very well planned.
The execution is wonderful with this ideal exposure.
I also like the composition and tone
Good Ev. From Qatar
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Joćo Tavares
{K:39114} 9/2/2006
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Excelent composition dear Philip !!
joćo
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