|
|
| Photographer |
Marty Provost {K:1760}
|
| Project |
#3 The Intimate Portrait
|
Camera Model |
Maxxum Xtsi
|
| Categories |
|
Film Format |
|
| Portfolio |
|
Lens |
70
|
| Uploaded |
3/9/2002 |
Film / Memory Type |
TMax
|
| |
|
ISO / Film Speed |
0 |
| Views |
201 |
Shutter |
|
| Favorites |
0
|
Aperture |
f/0 |
| Critiques |
2 |
Rating |
Critique Only Image
|
| Location |
City -
State -
Country -
|
| About |
|
|
Random Pictures By:
Marty
Provost
|
|
There are 2 Comments in 1 Pages
1
|
|
|
Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 3/10/2002
|
Yep this is cool too (like most of your images). I love the way she leans back against the rock! I think I would have prefered it had she had her head tilted forward though, and her looking straight into the camera in a seductive sort of way (like we know she can - as seen in other photos). Well done Marty :-)
|
|
|
|
|
J
{K:2647} 11/24/2002
|
Tilting her head more forward and having her look more seductive would have created a totally different photo. If you want to stay more with the current ambiance, I think having her bend more to the left side of the photo, and include more of her hands so you can use the arms as lines paralel to the lines of the rock, and guiding to her head, from where the ambiance is created by her expression. Also bending more to the left would make the lines of the body flow more with those of the rock I think.
The photo looks a bit greyish, but I think that's the border. Nice photo!
|
|
|
