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Kim Culbert
{K:37013} 3/11/2002
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Marty.... I recognized this as yours right away, thinking that SOMETHING was different, but not knowing what... then it hit me... you're in COLOUR! Out of the first 3 this is my fave. Such an unique pose, hanging over the tree. And the red top is very attention grabbing. I like the way that the tree branches frame the shot. There seems to be a lot of light on her stomach, though, and her face is a little dark. Maybe a reflector near her face would balance it out.
Great job, as usual.
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Jeroen Wenting
{K:25159} 3/11/2002
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Maybe it doesn't do much to you Bartosz (personally, I don't like the pose either) but technically it's a good job. Well exposed, good focus and excellent colours.
Maybe you should upload some more of your work to show what you like...
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 3/11/2002
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Bartosz, ouch man. Not much constructive in that feedback.
Kim, your absolutely right about the need for a reflector. I need some more tools. :)
Jeroen, is there anything you would suggest to make this a more interesting photo? I have a hard time myself seeing my color photos as looking like anything but snapshots.
Thanks,
-Marty
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John Doe
{K:155} 3/11/2002
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I like your photo here. It plays with my mind a bit. It's such a strange pose it's somewhat humorous ... but her serious expression and ... something else (perhaps the overall sense of artistry?) makes me avoid laughing. Your framing of the branches is well done. There's something vaguely Picasso-esq about this shot. Nice work.
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Daniel L Quigley-Skillin
{K:1350} 3/11/2002
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You by all means can voice your opinion. It's always nice though to suggest a way to "fix" it if you leave a negative remark. If you don't suggest what they did wrong, I assure you, they'll do it again.
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Harry
{K:12} 4/5/2002
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Bartoz is just a hater dont listen to him marty, i heart all your pics :)
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