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Stan Ciszek
{K:25734} 3/27/2007
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Bardzo ciekawy i expresyjny portret Lukasz.
pozdrowienia.
Stanislaw
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Francisco N-G
{K:26763} 3/27/2007
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Featured Critique
Lovely portrait, beautiful model in a very expressive pose; I like the tension on her right hand, however, her expression is not convincing of the action. The background is quite delightful and, in my opinion, it goes well with the complexion and outfit of the model. I like her hair, a bit wild and heavily lit, it adds to the expressive qualities of the artwork. Another concern is that some shadows are too harsh on her face, which would look so soft and beautiful with more even illumination.
That's just me, I'm sure that other more erudite opinions from the lighting experts from UF may think differently.
Best regards and congratulations for a beautiful image.
Francisco
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Anne Knes
{K:45270} 3/30/2007
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Excellent .
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Andre Denis
{K:55471} 4/2/2007
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Hello Lukasz,
I think I understand what Francisco is saying about the expression of the girl not quite fitting the action.
Maybe the only change might be to just have her look away from the camera with disinterst? Or look into the camera with a more aggressive attitude?
I do agree with your choice of lighting and wouldn't be concerned about the harsh shadows. I think that is fine for the mood created. The pale washed out look and wild hair work well together.
Lots of potential with this shot. Beautiful model!
Andre
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Michalis Stama togiannis
{K:9851} 4/10/2007
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Very nice portrait.
Well done,
Michalis
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:176808} 3/18/2008
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extraordinary.. Lukasz..
roby
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