A clever idea (looks very Pink Floyd) but for me just doesn't quite make it. Couple of suggestions: I think the closest egg should be green like the others and have the trailing red gauze on the grass. Also, I think a less distracting background would help - just the tree would be fine! And to make it really striking, the three eggs equally spaced along the diagonal! Maybe asking a lot, but I've looked at your portfolio and know you could do it!