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Aniko Heart
{K:25957} 4/7/2007
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Hi Bob!
I like this image just fine! Great concept and overall, well presented.
As this is a CC image, I would add my crtique as hopefully constructive...
Perhaps a little more contrast and a tad sharper, though different screens show differently... that is on of those unavoidable things that come with not seeing the hard copy...
Also, I would be inclined to place a fairly thin black border around the entire image... I feel it would enhance what is already a great compostion... tightening it up, so to speak.
Great work, Bob!
Best Wishes and all the best for Easter!
Aniko :)
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Bob Brins
{K:3798} 4/7/2007
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Thank you for your thoughts. I agree about the frame. Against the "usefilm" white, it tends to blend in on the upper left. It's actually pretty sharp. The translucent panels are a problem. If I bring them up to white, they loose the detail, crosshatched surface details. It's probably a hard thing to get across on line, though.
Thanks again,
Bob
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Aniko Heart
{K:25957} 4/8/2007
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I really like the tones actually, Bob. I understand re losing the details if you were to add too much contrast... I was thinking of only bumping it ever so slightly.
Also I am sure the image is much sharper than as I see on my screen. Perhaps I should clean my screen every so often! LOL!:)
Thank you for taking my comments in a positive manner. And yes, I do very often use a small frame (sometimes even a large one... hehehe...) as indeed, against the UF screen, we "lose" lighter parts of our images.
All the Very Best!
Aniko :)
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Bob Brins
{K:3798} 4/9/2007
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Just added a frame without any other changes and posted. What do you think, please?
Bob
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Aniko Heart
{K:25957} 4/9/2007
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I have replied to the framed version Bob.... :)
Check out how many others have now made comments! :) :) :)
All the best to you,
Aniko :)
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Bob Brins
{K:3798} 4/9/2007
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Thanks for your persistence, Aniko.
Bob
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Aniko Heart
{K:25957} 4/10/2007
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Persistence Dear Bob? :)
Ah... you refer to my pleasure! :) :) :)
You're very welcome.
All the best my friend,
Aniko :)
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Dominikus BW
{K:500} 4/15/2007
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for me it is perpect
while I look at your image my eyes always drag to the upper left it's because the upper left is lighter than other frames, if you could make it darker there will be no complain from me
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Bob Brins
{K:3798} 4/16/2007
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Thank you. I've uploaded another version, with a thin frame that partially addresses the issue you raise. But still, even with the frame, that upper left panel is brighter, perhaps distractingly so.
Bob
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Reza Jaffari
{K:1086} 5/5/2008
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its really great shot
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Andy Seehusen
{K:1662} 6/17/2008
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Nice shot, reminds me of something Piet Mondrian might have done.
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Bob Brins
{K:3798} 6/17/2008
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Thank you.
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