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Gene Zonis
{K:5347} 9/27/2007
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I like the title and the layout. The objects are well placed to make an interesting composition.Color and details are good. I would like to see it without the shadows.
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Dwight Parks
{K:4423} 9/30/2007
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Thanks Gene for the critique!
I may do a re-do of this in a light tent I made which should soften or negate the shadows.
I played with the composition quite a lot trying to pull you in from the shot glass / barrel to the broken heart. The heart was done by me digitally and the lighting and shadow effects added to try to match the shadow effect on the pistol and whisky bottle, etc.
I think maybe the subject and/or gun and alcohol may of frightened people out of making comments, and again I thank you for your very helpful comment.
Regards, Dwight
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Miguel Marques
{K:1194} 10/21/2007
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That is a dangerous combination.... Weel done.
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Dwight Parks
{K:4423} 10/21/2007
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Thank you, Miguel! Yes, a very deadly and dangerous combination indeed. A good pistol and a excellent whisky don't make good bedfellows, and either can break a heart!
Regards, Dwight
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