This image seems rather blurry and out of focus. While I admire trying to time the shot appropriately, the look the the subjects eyes just don't scream what you are going for. His eyes definitely tell a different story - no real 'life' in them. This is most likely due to lack of proper lighting. Of course, given the situation and place, there may not have been room for proper flash. The main thing that stands out to me is that it seems his shoulder is more in focus than his eyes.
Spencer Thanks for the useful critique. While i do not want to give cheap excuses i want to point out that i never use flash.And of course proper lighting does not exist in places like this anyway. Regards