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Bill Krul
{K:5724} 4/1/2002
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I'm glad I wasn't your model! LOL. I'm not sure what I feel about your submissions of models draped over chairs. I guess the best way to describe it "is uneasy". This shot may have benefitted from a more diagonal orientation in the frame.
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John Doe
{K:155} 4/2/2002
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Marty I love this one - the more unique the pose, the more I dig it. Love her outfit, love her gaze, love her hair. Your developing a unique and recognizable style.
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Martin Fisher
{K:5375} 4/3/2002
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I agree with Mr. Krul on this one. I think the model is uncomfortable. Or she makes me feel uncomfortable. Maybe if the model was on a chair that supported her back more. Maybe you wanted this look to your photo. I do however love the excellent use of the seamless (I see many photos where the seamless is very visable!) . I also love the use of the checkered clothes!
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 4/3/2002
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Thanks guys, I REALLY appreciate the feedback. This was my 3rd round in my new garage studio were my goal was to get good soft light and eliminate any shadows on the background. I think I've got that solved, now to try getting dramatic shadows without distracting shadows.
As for the model's pose, I really like it. Just a personal taste thing. Anybody can do comfortable, hahaha. ;)
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mimoza veliu
{K:424} 5/28/2002
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its looks in her eyes that she was feeling comfortable. this is the most important think in this shot. dont worry.it is a great work, just becouse of that. it is something special.
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