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Diego M
{K:2652} 11/14/2007
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good one - and the glasses, ...excellent!
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/14/2007
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Thank you so much Diego!
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Gust@vo Sch3v3rin
{K:122097} 11/14/2007
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Bella modelo, muy buen encuadre.
Felicitaciones!
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/14/2007
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Thank you Gustavo!
This is only my second time trying to shoot fashion.
Thanks for the kind comment!
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Paul Lara
{K:80165} 11/14/2007
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Here are some suggestions, Wayne:
- limit (or blur) the background elements, so it's ALL about your subject. Subject could be her blouse, her pants, or her shades. It should be evident at first glance what is the subject.
- Don't place your subject dead center, but to one side or another. In this shot, since she's looking up and left, I would crop out some of the space to her right.
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Hussam AL_ Khoder
{K:63849} 11/14/2007
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looks beautiful in the evening.
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/14/2007
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Thanks for the help Paul!
I was wondering if you would catch this one.
Ok, here is the crop with only minimal blur to the trees behind the deck. I really like the crop suggestion. It brings so much more to the image.
Now for isolating the "subject" There is more detail in the jeans than anything else, as the photographer here :) was paying a little more attention to exposure than DOF. The light was fading super fast. But, since the jeans are covered by the blouse a bit??? ok I'll wait for your suggestion on that one.
Should I blur out the detail on the deck or is that a bad idea?
Thanks for the advise!
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revised crop some blur |
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/14/2007
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Thanks, again, Hussam!
I appreciate the support!
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Paolo Corradini
{K:51792} 11/15/2007
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so nice the high contrast with the sky good fashion shot!
cheers
PAOLO
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/15/2007
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Thanks so much Paolo!
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Paul Lara
{K:80165} 11/15/2007
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As a rule, Wayne, avoid blurring foreground elements. I think this is an improvement, but you could also raise the contrast, since the white sky's not gonna get any whiter, but it can help her pop a bit more.
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/16/2007
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Awesome!
Thanks again Paul!
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Nicola Barbieri
{K:17974} 11/16/2007
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lovely portrait... great tones and composition...ciao, Nicola
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Pablo Dylan
{K:54583} 11/16/2007
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Excellent shot.
Pablo
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/19/2007
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Thank you Nicola!
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/19/2007
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Many thanks Pablo!
Much appreciated!
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John Hatz
{K:144528} 11/20/2007
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Excellent portrait Wayne, the style is great here, so the point you put your model at the corner of that balcony, the woods adds more classic mood here so the trees at the background (original, I like the fashion photos out of a room...original...why not!!!) I don't care about the sky's overexposure because here the main target is the model and not the landscape, absolutely excellent job...
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 11/20/2007
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Thank you so much John!
I really appreciate your support and kind words!
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abolfazl salmanzadeh
{K:401} 2/23/2008
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excellent composition.....Beautiful
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Wayne Winsauer
{K:6290} 2/25/2008
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Thank you Abolfazl!
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