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Image Title: Tubiacanga Sunset II
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| Photographer |
Bill Krul {K:5724}
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| Project |
#20 Classic Landscape
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Camera Model |
Bronica SQAi
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Film Format |
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| Portfolio |
Brazil
Seascape
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Lens |
40mm
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| Uploaded |
4/5/2002 |
Film / Memory Type |
Agfa hdx 100
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ISO / Film Speed |
0 |
| Views |
489 |
Shutter |
auto
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| Favorites |
0
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Aperture |
f/11 |
| Critiques |
3 |
Rating |
Critique Only Image
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| Location |
City -
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Country -
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| About |
Taken from the sunset capitol of Brazil. After a day of Photographing the kids, listening to Pagode music and a few beers, it was time to relax in front of the several marvelous sunsets in Tubicanga.
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There are 3 Comments in 1 Pages
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Bruce Wilson
{K:540} 4/5/2002
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I like the central figure, I think he adds to the shot. But the figures at the far right are too indistinct, I think, blending too much with the dark, to be meaningful. It appears that the left-central part of the shot, putting the standing figure at the left of the crop, might work better. You'll lose some of the colors, but the composition will be a bit stronger.
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Bill Krul
{K:5724} 4/5/2002
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How does this work? I might add that the figures that were cropped standout in the original but here they're mushy and blended into the black foreground. Thanks for the tip.
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Bruce Wilson
{K:540} 4/5/2002
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I like that. The crop now looks much cleaner, more deliberate, with some nice clean lines curving through the water.
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