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charlie f. kohn
{K:25475} 1/7/2008
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dear paul,
a strong studio portrait, by all means! how come you snatch up all the beautiful girls for your black project? tell me please what you promise to them that i can copy your method here for an opne charity *-)
very well done, indeed! and this shows that the girl is a natural!
saludos cordiales
charlie.f.kohn@sixpence-pictures.com // photography // design // madrid
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Avi
{K:67602} 1/7/2008
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Yes. OH YES !!!!
Nitpicking: The girl should have her lips sealed. The part of her teeth showing is reducing the 'oomph' !
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shahid habib ullah
{K:583} 1/7/2008
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good style of this picture and hear shodow on she eyes
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jacques brisebois
{K:70392} 1/7/2008
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another great capture, but prefer your other one, she didn't look to familiar with photography if you know what I mean... little bit of anxiety or something like that. But the technical is perfect.
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Brian T. Ach
{K:1742} 1/10/2008
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Nice effort here, but you have lost the whole right ide of her face to shadows from her hair and lack of fill. It would help if you had soft more fill over there. Maybe some more diffusion, as the light is kind of overly-contrasted, unless that is what you are gong for. But good effort on this, nice model.
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Paul Lara
{K:86864} 1/10/2008
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This was my first shoot using my giant soft box so there was a lot of experimentation with 1, 2 and 3-light setups. This was a 2-light setup with the softbox to left, and a 20-grid the hair light upper right.
Know what, Brian? You're right. :)
Thanks for your first impression - that sort of useful feedback is always welcome here.
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Yamil Saenz
{K:12454} 1/13/2008
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Excellent project Paul.
What about a full body of this gorgeous model.
Great tones, shadows and details.
Keep them coming.
Yamil
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Paul Lara
{K:86864} 1/13/2008
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I'll post a wider shot of Destiny for you, Yamil.
:)
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Yamil Saenz
{K:12454} 1/13/2008
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Thank you Sir,
I really appreciate your kindness.
Best.
Yamil
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