I find this one better than the other one so similar to this, Ian! This one generates the impression of a stronger "plasticity" of the whole perspective - perhaps also because of the presence of the darker left side? I rather perceive it as if a wave would be travelling to the right part of the image.
The coloring is also very nice here. Many unusual hues that somehow detach it again from absolute reality but without any perceivable intention to present any kind of a "miraculous tale", and that's what I quite like on many of your works: You systematically avoid to get kitschy - quite the contrary to many others here.
BTW, what about a series of images with exactly the same framing but many different colorings according to the time of the day? Could that be some interesting series of some integrity?