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Leo Régnier Я£
{K:62884} 2/19/2008
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Wonderful B&W. Congratulations!
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Al Ungar
{K:4005} 2/19/2008
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Kenny,
Welcome !! Nice image, idea is good, but I would have not put the crowd in the across the center of the image (Rule of Thirds). I would have incorporated the trees above their heads, because the pavement in front is of little interest.
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kenny lee
{K:261} 2/19/2008
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Thanks Al, I wanted to caputer this image in the 1st hand.
I shoud crop more of the pavement thou.
Thanks for the tips.
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Julie Salles
{K:16745} 2/19/2008
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Here you are dear Kenny, welcome to UF. I will have to disagree with Al, the rule of 3rd can be broken and here I feel that it was completely appropriate to capture the mood of the crowd. Great job, excellent in B&W.
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Ugo Rimoldi
{K:6190} 2/19/2008
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Bellissimo BW, complimenti.
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kenny lee
{K:261} 2/19/2008
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Julie,
Thanks for the comments.. I didnt want to start debating, whats right, whats wrong and yada yada :). Since I just join this great community yesterday. Thanks you all!!
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Al Ungar
{K:4005} 2/19/2008
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Kenny,
I guess I'm not afraid of debaiting. Julie is correct in one thing, rules can be broken but only when it adds impact to an image. But I have to disagree on the composition, putting the main subject in the center makes the picture static. The white sidewalk doesn't add one ounce of impact. A bright area will lead the eye away from the main subject. Actually I would crop it a a pano..see attached.
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kenny lee
{K:261} 2/19/2008
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Al,
Looks good buddy, like I mentioned on my previous post. I did want to recrop the bottom portion(pavement/sidewalk or what ever u called).
Look im no better than anyone here, Im just noobie,I just began with dSLR less than a year.
One last thing, the pics above I didnt shot in BnW, I use Lightroom to converted to BnW in RAW format. Thank you.
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Al Ungar
{K:4005} 2/20/2008
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Kenny,
We are all learning that's why we are here. I assumed you converted it from color to BW, we all do that now days.
Let me give you the site of a professional evaluator. He is a grreat guy. Does evaluations on images from the goodness of his heart. I've learned a buch from him. His evaluations are free and like I said he is a Pro, gets hired to judge images. His web site is :http://www.digapixblog.com/
Tell him I sent you. BTW my web site is www.auphotography.net. I don't really post a lot here, every once in a while like yesterday.
Al
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kenny lee
{K:261} 2/20/2008
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Thanks Al, great websit you have there.
I wil give digapixblog a shot.. Thank you.
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Al Ungar
{K:4005} 2/20/2008
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Thanks !!! Let me know how you like his reviews. Read the top one now on the SB Pier. That's not my shot but the next one is.
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