Pictures of get on bike (5.)

Photographer	Olga-Eva Krajciova {K:17420}
Project	N/A	Camera Model	Minolta
Categories	Portrait	Film Format	Digital JPEG
Portfolio	...by the window...autoportraits...	Lens	no idea
Uploaded	3/26/2008	Film / Memory Type	not used
		ISO / Film Speed
Views	66	Shutter
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/
Critiques	2	Rating	Critique Only Image
Location	City - Elgg State - Country - Switzerland
About	self on a bike of my brother´s son :)

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Gust@vo Sch3v3rin

{K:118246} 3/26/2008

Muy dinámico y de gran fuerza e impacto.
Bravo!, muy bueno.
Felicitaciones!

Nick Karagiaouroglou

{K:89303} 3/29/2008

In perfect defining focus except of the upper left corner that was too close to the lens - perhaps you could go for hyperfocus, Olga? The balance of the exposure was also a good one as it kept most important details except again of some overexposed regions (left part of face, left leg) that nonetheless fit well the "sunny" impression.

The composition in that angle does convey much spontanity and natural movement of the happening, and this is a good thing especially for arranged portraits, since many many times they try to look so spontaneous and they look only silly. I think that it only helped to not include the whole bike in the image - so it remained a good portrait too.

Only the face could have a bit more plasticity through shadows. It is already 3-D but a small correction toward less exposure could enhance that.

Cheers!

Nick

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