Pictures of Bored Butterfly - Minolta Maxxum Xtsi Camera

Photographer	Marty Provost {K:1760}
Project	N/A	Camera Model	Minolta Maxxum Xtsi
Categories		Film Format
Portfolio		Lens	50
Uploaded	4/12/2002	Film / Memory Type	TMax 400
		ISO / Film Speed	0
Views	282	Shutter
Favorites	0	Aperture	5.6
Critiques	2	Rating	Critique Only Image
Location	City - State - Country -
About	Working on shadowing with my new home garage studio with white background. Feedback greatly appreciated! :)

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Martin Fisher {K:5375} 4/12/2002

Marty: Just a suggestion. Try a small reflector, or a small well aimed light (ie barndoors) to light up the eyes just a little. I cant make eye contact with her and find it hard to connect. If you use barndoors, add a light softener like a small honeycomb grid, or a piece of screening.

al shaikh

{K:15790} 4/30/2002

A bit too much light on the nose and the bw seems muddy but the composition works here with the crazy chair. You need to balance the range of contrast better with a white reflector on the right side.

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