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sean slavin
{K:3488} 4/12/2002
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i'm not really good with portraits yet but i like this one. the one thing i might change would be to move her hair away from the left side of her face. from the one visible eye, there seems to be a pretty strong expression and i'd like to see the rest of the face. 8)
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Phillip Filtz
{K:1759} 4/12/2002
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Marty, please keep in mind this is my opinion, and like everyone else I have one ;)
The title is Bracelet. I don't see a bracelet. I see her left elbow in my face :) !! I'm also not sure whats hanging in front of her face. Another one, or hair??
I'm not exactly sure how I would shoot this if the bracelet was the target? Maybe from the side and close to it, having her go out of focus??
Just an observation.
Regards,
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james mickelson
{K:7344} 4/13/2002
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I like this one Marty. Very interesting. I like the tension this pose brings to the image.
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al shaikh
{K:15790} 4/30/2002
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This is better with the framing but you may want to consider trying to see in a square frame when trying compositional dynamics such as this, it lends itself more to this sort of distortion.
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Jennifer Nail
{K:451} 4/30/2002
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well, *i* see the bracelet. it's the size of her lower arm! hence the title "bracelet"..
i like the shadows. i'm not digging the strands of hair infront of her face. but the rest is pretty cool.
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