a very good capture of this ambient portrait- she stands beautifully in front of the camera. the people on the background they give much flavour to the composition by generating depth to it, i would probably do something about the black cloth in the foreground- i think it is a bit distracting.
Very nice colorful image. In my opinion it could be a little better with just a small adjustment. If you have photoshop CS2 or later, go to image/adjustment/highlight & shadows and accept the default setting. This will give the image more brightness. I also attempted to remove the black portion on the bottom of the photo using the clone stamp. Hope you like it.