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longing for childhood
Image Title:  longing for childhood
 
 By: fotogr@vi   
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Photographer fotogr@vi   {K:50315}
Project #32 Lines Camera Model -
Categories Children
Film Format
Portfolio Come, tell me a story
Lens 50_1.8
Uploaded 6/18/2008 Film / Memory Type -
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Views 557 Shutter
Favorites Aperture f/
Critiques 93 Rating Critique Only Image
Location City - 
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Country - United States   United States
About I remember.

when I was a child
walked with arms swinging in glee
wanted the brook to be a river
and a puddle to be the sea

when I was a child
didn't know that I was one
everything was soulful
and all souls were one

had a shyness in front of strangers
(and have that even now)
awaited the first snow
and do that even now

when I was a child
threw a stick against a tree
it quivers there still today
but is a memory

Inpsired by Peter Handke.
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There are 93 Comments in 1 Pages
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Dan Gheban   {K:3435} 6/18/2008
Excellent composition!


G P   {K:9768} 6/18/2008
Graze creativity=unusual :):):), Avi, looks like the ground it’s under the snow but the rubber floater seem summer day @ the beach :):):) I know you :):)
Cheers
Harry
Got to sleep :)


Shirley D. Cross   {K:140542} 6/18/2008
Fascinating composition, dear Avi, and great 'about'.:)


Adam Schiavone   {K:1191} 6/18/2008
Well seen Avi! Nice how the child is offset from the innertube and out of focus - very nice touch!


Michele Carlsen   {K:127677} 6/18/2008
Hi Avi .... Nice image here - I like the 'about' as it explains the fence a bit more as the barrier from when you were a child (?) anyway this is the way I view it - and it is a very nice image for me !!
Cheers,
Michele~


soumya     {K:4274} 6/18/2008
story aachhe. cholbe..


txules  .   {K:29390} 6/18/2008
interesting, very creative composition as always, one of your strengths, like it a lot...take care
txules


Aniket Chakrabarty   {K:2469} 6/18/2008
Excellent composition.


AJ Miller   {K:44211} 6/18/2008
A striking composition - just two elements on a grid. A scene from reality given a graphic feel. The inflatable boat seems more appropriate for the beach than the snow. (Which gives me a thought - without the piled up snow at bottom left, it could be ambiguous as to whether this was snow or over-exposed sand...)

AJ


Pablo Dylan   {K:53463} 6/18/2008
Excellent shot my friend.

Pablo


Julie Salles   {K:15921} 6/18/2008
Excellent Avi. Love the poem as well.
Best,
Julie.


Gary Hill   {K:31200} 6/18/2008
What an unusual shot. Most of us would have been tempted to poke the lens through the fence but including it gives the image another dimension. I think I'd be tempted to crop the horizontal top of the fencing to match the bottom of the frame. It's good to see the old 50mm standard lens being used (says me who's got loads of them but very rarely use them).
Regards, Gary


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
Yes Michele, you are absoultely right. As I stood on this side of the fence and was looking out, I had the exact feeling that I wrote here (in a poem). I wanted to go out and slide on the snow on those rubber things along with those kids.. but alas, age and responsibilities held my hands. Also, note, I have kept a little free space at the top of the fence and did not cover up the whole frame, to build my story - otherwise it may have looked like captivity !

Thanks for your wonderful critique and observations !!

Cheers !!
Avi


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
Thank you very much my friend. I just explained the top uncropped part to Michele.. thought it was imp for my story. Do you think it works ?

best,
Avi


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
I know :):):) .. and that is exactly why I kept that very small part of piled up snow at the bottom left of the image.. AJ also pointed it out !!! ..

And I was a good boy, and went to sleep right after I posted the shot :):)

Have a great day !!
Avi


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
I know :):):) .. and that is exactly why I kept that very small part of piled up snow at the bottom left of the image..

Thanks for your wonderful critique and observation, AJ !!

Cheers !!
Avi


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
Thank you very much Aniket.


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
Thanks Adam. Hey, I used the texture merge technique in one of my shots, forgot to thank you mate:

http://www.usefilm.com/image.asp?id=1437308


Arif Ertan Ersoy   {K:24092} 6/18/2008
very well composed!! i love the texture!! original work!
compliments my friend!
arif


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
Thanks very much, Shirley. Long time, no new photos ?? (or did you also fall to the inevitable 'pressure of constantly taking new and outstanding photos') ?? ..lol...

take care.


ANANDA NIYOGI   {K:3129} 6/18/2008
Eta bapok hoyeche. Satyi kotha bolte about section ta keno likhli jani na. Tor chobita kintu emnitei ekta story boleche. Amar mone hoy title ta enough chilo ei case e.


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
Thank you... Thank you.. :):)


Tim  Schumm   {K:26928} 6/18/2008
Great composition....


Shirley D. Cross   {K:140542} 6/18/2008
You're welcome, dear Avi! No, I've been very busy with my Sweetheart who recently had serious shoulder surgery, so I'm not able to work with my photos at his place. At least I'm able to post comments on UF and visit my friends.:)


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
you mean your husband, right ? well, I do wish him lightning fast recovery and good health !! (so that you could get back to photos too.. see, I am not entirely as noble as you think !! ... lol)

take care.


txules  .   {K:29390} 6/18/2008
wow man, congrats on the award, editors are alive (for one time)
this is really good Avi
jd


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/18/2008
.. even I saw it just now.. thanks JD !!.. hey listen, I will send you a mail tonight.. need to discuss some more issues about lighting :)


ANANDA NIYOGI   {K:3129} 6/18/2008
Aami ebar pagol hoye jabo. Ki arambo korechish ta ki tui.


AJ Miller   {K:44211} 6/18/2008
And now it has an EC! Nice one, Avi!

AJ


Srna Stankovic   {K:106802} 6/18/2008
Congratulations Avi !!! :)))
But if I were you would not kept my childhood as a memory ... for sure would jump over the fence and be a child among children !!! :)))
Fine work though, well deserved !
Hug,
Srna


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
:) thanks my friend. Trust me, I was REALLY REALLY tempted.. :)


Malules Fernandez   {K:3053} 6/19/2008
I love this picture.
Excellent composition!!!

congratulations,
Malules


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
thank you very much, Malules !!!


txules  .   {K:29390} 6/19/2008
going 15 days on vacations Avi, but I'd try to read your email
take care


Saikat (Boney) Das   {K:1676} 6/19/2008
bahhhh.. darun composition...excellent


Shadi Porooshani   {K:9695} 6/19/2008
....congragulation........
very well cmposition
regards
shadi


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
no hurry.. have a great time. come back and shoot a mail, we'll talk..


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
thanks Boney !


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
thanks Shadi !!


SAIKAT  DAS   {K:1429} 6/19/2008
wow ... just wow


Ronny Sen   {K:636} 6/19/2008
Are editor kaku abar prize diyeche,bah bah bah
bhalo chobi,amar pochonder :)


Nilanjan Mitra   {K:12245} 6/19/2008
haan ei ta too good compo... :) byapok byapok...


Tap  Ioka   {K:2080} 6/19/2008
Splendid work. Very creative and imaginative. Regards.
Tap


Shirley D. Cross   {K:140542} 6/19/2008
No, dear Avi. My husband died in 2005. I am in love with a wonderful man. We have been together now for 10 months. Yes, I am eager to get back to playing with and posting my photos, too.:)


Tap  Ioka   {K:2080} 6/19/2008
The number of comments is unusual what means this photo must be something. And I 100% second that opinion. Regards.
Tap


Antonio Torkio   {K:5231} 6/19/2008
great! congrats x EC my friend :))))
Antonio


Aniket Chakrabarty   {K:2469} 6/19/2008
Oh mama ami judge hoe gechi, jai dichhi dekho chobi na tulte parleo judgement er khomota to dekho.....ha ha ha. Darun darun.


Srna Stankovic   {K:106802} 6/19/2008
and cause i really really felt you were ,,, if you do not mind ... next time just be a child (my warm and friendly advice) ... do not stop your inner child in your self, you will be much more happier my dear, it is much more natural than stopping your self ...
you do this all the time ... you do think too much ... relax, smile, be who you are deep inside of you, let this other Avi to get out ... personally I do like him very much, maybe you will love him too like the others will do not hide him the most of the time !!!
sincerely hugs


Ilir Xhemsiti   {K:4276} 6/19/2008
Interesting shot my friend,great idea,..bravo.


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
thanks Srna. I will. I know, the inhibitions - how they tie one as we grow up, but it is all in the mind. we just need to break it and go ahead and do what the heart says.. I just got to do it.


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/19/2008
Happy to know that you did find someone wonderful. Wish him all the best, and a very good time for both of you. see you soon :)


Srna Stankovic   {K:106802} 6/19/2008
:-)


Keith Saint   {K:10926} 6/20/2008
Well done on the award Avi
Very creative composition and use of depth


Shirley D. Cross   {K:140542} 6/20/2008
Thank you, dear Avi!:)


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/20/2008
thank you Keith !


Noemi Jurado   {K:8199} 6/20/2008
Congratulatiosn Avi this is awesome! Very well seen my friend. Your image is highly unsual and very unique. Love the cool sensation!


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/20/2008
Thank you very much, Noemi !!!


Nick Karagiaouroglou   {K:89303} 6/20/2008
Congratulations for this so simple but so strong spectacle, Avi! After having seen so much fantasy-salad made in PS about such subjects, I jump off ground with this serious, strong, definite, and *photographical* implementation!

From the purely visual point of view, it gives me a nice kick by the splash of the red/violet colors in the foreground of a B&W-like image. And another one for its absolute geometry in plane (the grid) and perpendicular to the plane, i.e to the depth of the leading line from the snow-boat (or whatever we call it) to the out of focus kid back there. (Not to mention the very exact exposure that turned the most part of it behind the grid simply white.)

These two things, color and geometry, together with the partial DoF generate some "memory" but also "wish" for the now unreachable childhood. It unreachable because that grid is the unoenetrable limit. I can't go any further than that. It also has some similarity to time. Much like the limit up to which mind can walk back in time on the wish to re-discover what was that, which "enabled" childhood. Up to that point I can walk back, but whatever lies behind that is only visible with uncertainty - perhaps because my mind was conditioned in a way that doesn't allow to really see what makes up childhood. The wish is there but the boundaries are hard.

Excellent idea, really, am more than deserved EC-award, and hat off with a big big cheers to you!!!

Nick


mansoor mohamadi   {K:819} 6/20/2008
Nice composition & good idea dear Avi
Mansoor


Debarshi Duttagupta   {K:25574} 6/20/2008
Congrats , Fatiye diyechish to ! Great.


Paolo Corradini   {K:50531} 6/20/2008
wowo outstanding!!!!!! bravo


Gust@vo Sch3v3rin   {K:118246} 6/21/2008
Excelente la composición y muy merecido el award.

Felicitaciones!


G P   {K:9768} 6/21/2008
First congratulations, Avi, Wow :):) I was surprised but who cares if my friend is happy :):):):):)
Cheers,
Harry


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/21/2008
Thanks my friend !!


Peter De Rycke   {K:39283} 6/21/2008
Super photo ! Congrats with the award !!


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/22/2008
Thanks Nick. As I had said this once before too, you truly explain my photos better than I myself could.

CHEERS !!!!!
Avi


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/22/2008
thanks Rishi.


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/22/2008
Thanks Peter !


vanessa shakesheff   {K:62845} 6/22/2008
Congrats on your award and excellent picture..nessa


Ivona Lozic   {K:1218} 6/22/2008
Wooow, nice lyrics, like it... and snow motive, in this sumer hot day :-)

Regards, Iv.


a. gianfranco baccelli   {K:19333} 6/22/2008
My compliments! Congrats for the EC.


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/22/2008
Thanks Nessa !


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/22/2008
thanks my friend !!


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/22/2008
thanks very much, Ivona !! cheers, Avi


1301307 60   {K:40776} 6/23/2008
Wow! congrats my friend, was out of town and was very happy to see this award..
great composition Avi!
Cheers!


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/23/2008
Thanks very much !!.. stay online, am going to post a new one.. :)


Debjit Ghosh   {K:3345} 6/23/2008
Congrats! Well deserved one.


Nick Karagiaouroglou   {K:89303} 6/23/2008
This time you really spoke an unmistakeable photographic message, Avi! Which is the only reason why I can "explain" the imageat all!

Cheers!

Nick


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/23/2008
Thanks. Tor bhalo laagle ami khushi. :)


violetta  tarnowska   {K:23948} 6/25/2008
Wow! Fantastic idea! Excellent realization.
Congratulations, Avi! :)
Viola


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/25/2008
thanks very much :)


Kiarang Alaei   {K:48453} 6/27/2008
Perfect!


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/27/2008
Thank you, my friend !!!

Salaam !!
Avi


Kiarang Alaei   {K:48453} 6/27/2008
You are welcome dear Avi!


sascha jonack   {K:17594} 6/28/2008
Yo Avi, I have just checked out your portfolio and I have to say I am really impressed. Your images really have become a very hight quality and by receiving all the awards only points out what I see.
Awesome POV and really an excellent use of light and DOF.
Best wishes my friend.
Sascha


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/28/2008
thanks very much, my dear friend !! cheers, Avi


Robin Wickenkamp   {K:16356} 6/28/2008
Congratulations Avi...it's good to see great work recognized! :)

Take care...Robin


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/28/2008
thanks Robin.. hope everything is great at your end !

special hugs for Tyler !!
Avi


Robin Wickenkamp   {K:16356} 6/28/2008
You're welcome Avi. And thank you for remembering Tyler!

ps...I just sent you an e-mail about your "memoirs" post. :)


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 6/28/2008
Oh I never forget kids.. I LOVE kids.. :):)

Replied to your e-mail. Pls check and let me know.


Dirk Noort   {K:9617} 7/22/2008
Excellent effects, very creative!
Dirk


1301307 60   {K:40776} 8/16/2008
Wow! congratulations for this well deserved EC!!
very good composition!
CHEERS!!!
regards..


fotogr@vi     {K:50315} 8/16/2008
Thanks again Bobot ! :)
cheers!!!


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