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Image Title:  innocence 002
 
 By: aZiZ aBc  
  Copyright ©2008



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Photographer aZiZ aBc {K:26095}
Project #66 Innocence Camera Model Canon G9
Categories Candids
Children
Street
Film Format
Portfolio Voyage
Lens built in lens
Uploaded 9/2/2008 Film / Memory Type LG 2 Gb
    ISO / Film Speed
Views 154 Shutter
Favorites Aperture f/
Critiques 17 Rating
7.00
/ 3 Ratings
Location City -  Mecca
State - 
Country - Saudi Arabia   Saudi Arabia
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There are 17 Comments in 1 Pages
  1
Olga-Eva Krajciova   {K:18874} 9/2/2008
Very beautiful picture. I like the whole composition, the child seems to be innocent, having fun in the middle of the street :) I like the tones of colours in here. That picture hides several "points" which make me imagine who else was in there with the child. Is that the leg of his mother? Than it looks she carried about him all the time. Are there wheels of car? Than it looks like a crowded street...I like when the image is a story I can imagine and think about.
Well done image!
Best regards
Olga


ayman zakaria   {K:1892} 9/2/2008
very beautiful


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/2/2008
Thanks Ayman.
شكرآ جزيلآ.
اسعد الله شهر الرمضان لك.
عزيز


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/2/2008
Thank you so much dear Olga.


Nick Karagiaouroglou   {K:126841} 9/2/2008
Of only that "green leg" wasn't there it would hab^ve been perfect in temrs of composition, Aziz! Still a good one for its timing and view.

What about more contrast? (Attachment)

Cheers!

Nick

Adjusted levels for contrast


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/2/2008
Nick
I see no more adding value on more contrast.
For the green leg : First of all it is not easy to remove that, and in addition I have the same idea as Olga has ( refer to its comment at the top).
H'n H
Aziz


Saad Salem   {K:62784} 9/2/2008
Ramadan Mubarak dear Aziz,what is more innocent than a bird and a child in Mecca? you no that the birds of Mecca can not be killed,it is a God law,being there is innocence in itself,my regards,
Saad.


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/2/2008
Happy Ramadan (Ramazan in persinated arabic !!)
Thanks for approval, dear Saad.


Shadi Porooshani   {K:10978} 9/3/2008
i like it very much


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/3/2008
Happy you like it, Shadi.


Stan Ciszek   {K:44374} 9/3/2008
And another marvellous shot,my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
God Bless.


Grzegorz Markowski   {K:4827} 9/3/2008
:) I like it


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/3/2008
Thanks dear Stan.


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 9/3/2008
Happy you like it.
Health and happiness
Aziz


Nick Karagiaouroglou   {K:126841} 9/4/2008
The color level adjustment removed the bit of "haze" over the image, Aziz, but it also exaggerated the contrast on the kid's face, and that's why I was (and still am) not sure about that too. Since the kid is the protagonist here, it should also receive the greatest part of attention and nothing should be done that weakens its good look. I also tried to select everything else but the child and apply the adjustment then, but it still seems to have a negative effect on the child. So I still wonder if it is possible at all to remove the already mentioned bit of haze but leave the face of the child intact. Hard to say.

About that kind of sentimental "wondering", about his mother and similar, what to do with that? Ok, let me wonder too, is that his caring mother, and ooh how nice and the like. And then? Am I perhaps some family caretaker?

The thing is is, that small part of the woman there is too small for a real role on the image, and too big to be neglidgible. It is too near the kid, and the color... It doesn't look as if it was a "design" or "composition" factor. You needed more of of the boy's (hypothetical) mother for that. This way it looks like an intruder that was incidentally there.

Of course we can start assuming anything behind all possible things on some image, and so also assume some "hidden symbolic" behind the corn as "food and base of existence". But this is pseudo-philosophy. If we follow such a "philosophy" then all images have something of that, and if this makes them automatically interesting, then we are all automatically perfect photographers. Cheap, isn't it?

Cheers!

Nick


Ali Khodadadi   {K:117} 10/14/2008
very lovly picture and composition.but i think it was better to edit the green cloth of the picture.be sucsess.


aZiZ aBc   {K:26095} 10/14/2008
Thank you dear Ali for the comment.


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