Pictures of Jessica Rose - Minolta Maxxum Xtsi Camera

Photographer	Marty Provost {K:1760}
Project	#3 The Intimate Portrait	Camera Model	Minolta Maxxum Xtsi
Categories		Film Format
Portfolio		Lens	90
Uploaded	4/19/2002	Film / Memory Type	Tmax 400
		ISO / Film Speed	0
Views	388	Shutter
Favorites	0	Aperture	f/0
Critiques	3	Rating	Critique Only Image
Location	City - State - Country -
About	Colored the rose in PS.

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Kristupa Saragih {K:1031} 4/20/2002

Your decision to cut the model's hand and knee is unpleasant to see... it might be better not to include them on the pic or take the whole hand and knee (in this pose)... and for me it's a bit unsharp (or maybe just a scanning problem though)

Shary Shary {K:428} 4/27/2002

As far as cutting hands are concerned, I agree with Kristupa. Otherwise, I like this image: The model's head is leaned twords the read flower. A read flower in a B/w image is very creative. It is a good idea to choose TMAX 400 (a faster film) to smooth the lady's image. Beaufitul image.

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{K:15790} 4/30/2002

Marty ditch the rose, it just destroys the shot. You had a great shot at a portrait and instead the framing kills it because the eye is split with the rose. Try to connect with the subject and forget the rest.

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