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Arthur John Grossman III
{K:1214} 5/3/2002
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Hey Marty!
The tonality on this one seems a little on the flat side to me. Her face seems to recede, and the shirt seems to POP forward. But, that is neither here nor there because it is simply my opinion.
Take it for what its worth and stick to YOUR creative vision!
Keep shooting.
A.J.
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Phillip Cohen
{K:9538} 5/3/2002
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I agree with Arthur on this one, need to bump up the contrast a bit to get a bit more pop the face and hair while some how toning down the shirt. She is a very beautiful woman so even with flat tones this is a nice image.
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Phillip Filtz
{K:1759} 5/3/2002
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Ditto Marty....
I hope to see more of her.
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 5/3/2002
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Thanks guys, I probably screwed it up in ps. I'll rescan it soon and see if I can adjust it.
I still have 2 more rolls that I took that day of her that I haven't scanned in yet so there will be more of her soon. Also, she's a close friend of mine and this was her first time in front of the camera. Good sign: these photos made her want to do it again! :)
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Debbie Groff
{K:9569} 5/4/2002
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I personally like the tone of her skin in comparison to the white shirt. Gives the look of a healthy outdoor tan.
Could use a reflector to the facial area for just a tad bit more light to match the arm skin tone.
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Ralph Friedman
{K:647} 10/1/2003
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Personally, I would have called it, "fantastic smile". Fantastic image, too, seems to clearly capture the personality of the subject.
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David Stevens
{K:803} 1/14/2004
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She's a lovely model and she was excellent subject for a lovely portrait.
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