use of space is ok, dof could use just a little more......but this is ok......lighting....this is all about lighting with a bit more drama and purpose.....the lighting on the bolt is more dramatic than on your POF......and the lighting on the base of the board is also.....this is worth a redo Pete and work the lights to mold and shape your subject........and use reflector cards or panels to control your light.......Keep it up.......