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Image Title: Asian Adrienne
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| Photographer |
Marty Provost {K:1760}
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| Project |
#3 The Intimate Portrait
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Camera Model |
Minolta Dynax 800si
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Lens |
50mm
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| Uploaded |
6/27/2002 |
Film / Memory Type |
Kodak Select B/W
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ISO / Film Speed |
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237 |
Shutter |
125
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Aperture |
8 |
| Critiques |
3 |
Rating |
Critique Only Image
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Last one from my first roll using new equipment. Soft box at 45 degree with reflector to seperate her from background. Suggestions?
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There are 3 Comments in 1 Pages
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Kim Culbert
{K:37013} 6/27/2002
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marty, i haven't made it yet to look at the rest of the images in this series, but this is beautiful. The soft, classic look is really detailed here.
I think I would like to see just a little more fill on the right side of her though, to add just a little more light on her face and the arm that is lost in the fan shadow.
The chopsticks in the hair help to bring her out from the bg.. nicely done.
Was she sitting? I ask because the skirt is a little wrinkled... just need to take that one last look at the scene before you snap!
All in all I think you've come a long way, and I love this look.
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Terrence Kent
{K:7023} 6/27/2002
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Great series marty, glad to see you hitting the studio fullblast, lots of fun and learning to be had, love the attire and props you picked out, sidelighting works great. My only suggestions are to see how filling in the shadows at varying ratios and likewise spotlighting the BG effects your image, just to have variations to choose from, go marty go~
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 6/28/2002
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Thank you Kim and Terrence.
Kim: she was sitting.
Terrence: My next shoot I'm going to work with rim lighting. Last night I shot the 2nd roll and wanted to add a light on the background to get rid of the line where the paper meets the floor but was unsuccessful. Suggestions? I have barndoors and a honeycomb grid.
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