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Barry Tipping
{K:959} 7/9/2002
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Marty,
Have I mentioned that you are SO lucky to be married to a model! ;) If you have the room, you should try to get the model further from the background. In this picture, your dark seamless is wrinkled and provides a distraction to the subject, if she were further from the background, the light falloff would probably take care of the detail in the seamless. I love the pose, but her head is turned 5-10 degrees too far, so that her right eye is subtended by the bridge of her nose. Keep shooting! ;)
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Kim Culbert
{K:37013} 7/9/2002
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marty... you've come a long way since I first joined usefilm! These shots show that you've grown as a photographer, and it seems that you've easily grasped the concept of all the new equipment. Congrats!
I like this pose and the clothing that goes with it. Your wife has an extensive shoe collection! Very cool. I agree that having a solid background would really make her stand out, as well as just a tad more fill on her right side of her face.
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Katia Cutrone
{K:12940} 7/9/2002
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This position is too "Pulp Fiction"...
I don't know if it's the light or her make up, but the eyes are too dark, I think the light anyway, because the body is a perfect tone of light.
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 7/9/2002
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Thank you for the feedback. I'm still learning how to work with the backgrounds and fill light. Taking another roll tonight! :)
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RamPrasad
{K:8} 7/10/2002
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Hi i would like to know what is ur Email id i want to mail im a RamPrasad here im photographer from India my profession is im S/W Engineer
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 7/10/2002
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Hi RamPrasad, my email address is marty@velocitysystems.net
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