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| Photographer |
Marty Provost {K:1760}
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| Project |
#3 The Intimate Portrait
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Camera Model |
Minolta Dynax 800si
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Film Format |
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Lens |
50
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| Uploaded |
7/10/2002 |
Film / Memory Type |
Kodak Elite Chrome 200
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ISO / Film Speed |
0 |
| Views |
171 |
Shutter |
125
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| Favorites |
0
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Aperture |
5.6 |
| Critiques |
3 |
Rating |
Critique Only Image
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| Location |
City -
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Country -
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| About |
My first traditional portrait, and it's in color! ;)
Soft box at 45 degrees to models left, umbrella at 45 degrees to models right, reflector to models right.
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There are 3 Comments in 1 Pages
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Asha Rajan
{K:292} 7/10/2002
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Marty, nice setup, but there's something not quite ... right about it. The model's face seems a bit too harshly lit, or is it the makeup? If it's the makeup, you might want to suggest that she applies her foundation to her entire décolletage so it looks more even, or try a slightly darker colour? Also, maybe get her to look more to her right and a faint smile? She looks a little...ummm...bored? Sorry, don't mean to nitpick, but it just looks a little unnatural at the moment. Hope it helps.
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Julia G
{K:222} 7/12/2002
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Asha makes a good point - I find that when people 'look' serious, they tend to look kind of mad or bored - I try to get them to think about something mischievious, then you can usually get that slight up turn at the corners of their mouths...I hope that doesn't sound too stupid.....
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Marty Provost
{K:1760} 7/15/2002
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Thank you both for the feedback.
I'm still working on getting her facial tone to match her body. I've also worked with on her expressions as well. Both of your comments have helped me on my shots after. Thanks!
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